Sep 22, 2024

To:Lucid Levia

P.S. This song is a 10/10 I had to reread the last bits with it playing it’s just 🥹

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Sep 22, 2024

Naaaah what is this (PLUS THE SONG MAN) I wasn’t ready to cry on a Sunday morning 😭😭 THIS WAS SO DAMN BEAUTIFUL LUC I’m genuinely emotional rn 🥹 Clover forgiving his father and soon himself after seeing that everyone managed to overcome their own trauma is so heartwarming 🥲 THE GROUP HUG! I NEED A POSTER OF THAT ON MY WALL FRFR 😤😤😤

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Sep 16, 2024

AYO REN?! I THOUGHT MY BRO WAS INVINCIBLE who the hell is that Obsidian and why is he so OP? 😭😭😭😭 Man we got ultra cooked here Monty has some powerful friends that’s for sure and now I’m getting increasingly nervous for whats to come 😭 BUT FIRST SAVE MY DUDE GUYS COME ON 🙏🏻🙏🏻

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Sep 11, 2024

Hell nah MONTY AND THE TRAIN ARE COMING I KNEW IT GODDAMN 😭😭 At least Ren realized what is about to go down and they didn’t get hit by a complete surprise attack cause that would be horrific 💀 REN MADUDE you need to stop Monty pls 🙏🏻

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Sep 09, 2024

Horace being everybody’s mom and dad is back! 😭 Bro started sewing everybody’s clothes and making breakfast right off the bat! If you told me the presumed bad guy from the start of the novel would play maid at chapter 71 I’d tell you you were having a fever dream 🥴
AND THE SOLOMON TRAINING BEGINS! The real Solomon training, the previous ones were just the teaser trailer for what’s to come 👀 If nobody meets their end through all that I’m sure they’ll come out of it super stronger than before 🤝 Now we only wait for Clover and Dorothy for the squad to be complete!
Aaaaaand Monty 👀 I have a feeling bro will likely crash the party 😭

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Sep 05, 2024

That flashback of Dorothy and Horace tho 🥹🥹 NOW I see how in their amnesiac state everybody thought their father was Horace! He’s everybody’s mom and dad all in one what the hell his character really did a full 180 in my head 😭

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Sep 05, 2024

Dorothy is such a sweetheart look at what she did 😭😭😭 Not only did she manage to forgive herself and be better, she’s also helping her brother with his trauma naaaah why is she so wholesome 😭😭😭 That hug 🥹
AND FINALLY THE WHOLE CREW BACK AT THE MANSION ONCE MOREEE WE ARE COOKING I REPEAT WE ARE COOKING 😤 Are we gonna get to see Clover forgive his dad now? 🥹 Are we finally getting one united front? I bet something is gonna go down before they all reconcile happily tho 👀

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Sep 02, 2024

🥹🥹🥹🥹 MAN IM GONNA CRY THEY GROW UP SO FAST LOOK AT HER 😭😭 I was about to punch a hole through the wall when Dorothy thought about not being alive but man she found her purpose and it’s beautiful 🥹 Strength can be used both for destruction and protection, you choose what you do with it 🤝 Absolutely deserved moment for best girl ❤️ (YES I SAID IT, DOROTHY IS BEST GIRL) (actually all of them are 👍)

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Aug 30, 2024

NOOOOOO poor Dorothy man she went on a rampage and killed everyone 😭😭 Nah I mean I love Solomon but bro keep your children under supervision if they’re gonna destroy the whole house by just drinking alcohol you can’t just be like “ight” 😭😭😭 Poor Dorothy man somebody tell her it’s not her fault pls 🙏🏻
KICK THEIR FAMILY JEWELS nah I can’t with Rouge she is too perfect lmao 😤 I sure hope Dorothy doesn’t do anything that will traumatize her further now 🙏🏻 BUT now her background story makes so much sense!

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Aug 28, 2024

YO THIS CHAPTER WAS EPIC I don’t know how or why but the writing the suspense and everything in between was just *chef’s kiss* 💋 Monty SAID WHAT ABOUT FIONA THO? HE WANTS TO CREATE WHAT?! 😭 Naaaah this is getting too hype I can’t man 😤
Dorothy getting recovering some of her memories and those distorted texts right before the attack 😭 The suspense maaaaan what a great delivery but WHAT THE HELL THEY REALLY RAIDED THE PLACE BRO 😭 I am sure Monty was sure this would happen and was like “yep they will defo go there, nice diversion 👍”

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Aug 23, 2024

To:Taylor J

I can’t wait to read your next entry Taylor! I’m sure it will be a blast 🥳

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Aug 23, 2024

To:Taylor J

Thank you so much for reading Taylor it was so nice revisiting this story through reading your comment since it’s been a while! I’m so glad you enjoyed it ❤️

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Aug 19, 2024

NOOOOOO ORTRONE I DIDNT EVEN KNOW I LIKED YOU THIS MUCH BEFORE YOU GOT MURDERED 😭😭😭 THIS MONTY bro he is already on my most hated list 😤
My man grasped the true meaning of family in his last moments maaaan he couldn’t even tell them 😭😭 I love how everybody loves Cherry, she truly is a hearth 🥹
But… R.I.P. my man 🙏🏻 you shall be missed, you and your train both 🙏🏻

P.S. Monty and that hair loving stranger 😤 I have a feeling Solomon will cook them 👍

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Aug 19, 2024

AAAAAA THIS LAST CHAPTER 😭 now it really ended 😭 The crystal ball is such a nice way to foreshadow what happens in the future of this story without actually telling us, I greatly appreciate that 😤🤝
And it ends with tea time… Man I’m gonna miss everyone 🥹

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Aug 19, 2024

BRAVOOOO 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
man this was so wholesome, lighthearted and fun to read I'm sad to see it end 😭 But we got the best ending possible for our lovely cast so I'm… happy 🥹 Nah who's cutting the onions now? 😭
As a story overall Taylor I can't help but congratulate you for writing such a fun story! the concept of the magic workings, the moon, the rings, and the trials were all so nicely crafted as well as creative! I could instantly love the characters from the very first moment we engaged with them and I love how you chose a particular light hearted style of storytelling and kept up with it! The romance, the challenges, the bonds, it all felt like reading a fairytale ✨
Thank you for writing Taylor!

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