Aug 13, 2023
Amazing man. Everyone followed their own paths, and succeeded 🤝 Kasumi supporting Haru too ❤️
And Grace helping people like she did with Haru even after her passing 🙏🏻
You know I could probably go on and write a ton of stuff about how much I loved this story and how great of a job you did in writing it Kaze. But I’d rather keep it short and to the point (as short as my oversharing nature allows) Not to mention how bad I am at expressing myself and end up going on rants. In short: you moved me. In long:
This story has been quite the journey. From chapter 1 if could feel it was gonna be special, as it envoked somewhat of a nostalgia to me, even without knowing what it held in the future. The characters you crafted each had their own life, their own quirkiness and played amazingly off each other. Haru was the one that grew more out of the bunch, but always seemed like someone “special” that just needed that push. Kasumi, okay, (best gurl cough) is a personal favourite of mine, just because of how considerate she was but also ultimately fun to read. Not to mention the comedy that although silly at times (deez balls ⚽️) was just RIGHT to make me laugh.
All in all tho, I think it boils down to the delivery and how you wrote everything. You just know how to tug at heartstrings man 😭 All the descriptions, the dialogue, every little bit of wording choice was just right. Songs, monologues, emotional narrations. You created a lovely world I am glad to have experienced! Thanks for writing Kaze and for this story! ❤️
