Aug 31, 2023

To:ryba

Haruhi not messing about 🔥 in places with many tourists, finding these parts of the area is truly treasure 🙏🏻

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Aug 31, 2023

To:ryba

Pat pat 😊 good job Haru!

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Aug 31, 2023

To:ryba

Yuuto-san barged in like Konya with a low meter 😭 About to wreck everything 🔨

P.S. We love Konya

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Aug 31, 2023

To:Koyomi

Smh kids these days 🚬 In my day it was all about KOKORO!

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Aug 31, 2023

To:minatika

It’s pantsu tissue time 🤧 NOOO ABORT! 😭
Raining on blackmail, storming for Mina 🙏🏻 stay strong people, after rain comes a beautiful rainbow 🌈 Or a Yuuto-san! VAR! I loved that play by play 🤣 bro the shipwrecker…

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Aug 31, 2023

To:IceDonut

MY BRO KNOWS THE FUTURE AAAAA 🔮 But if you’re getting to that conclusion with a guess then that means my goal has been achieved… development 🥁

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Aug 31, 2023

To:Shulox

My cliffhanging bro (don’t hang from a clifff bro plz 😭) 🙏🏻
*insert skeleton smoking meme* 💀🚬
Bro put the code for infinite ammo I salute 🫡 now Haruhi needs to defeat boss! Or just compliment and spare 👏

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Aug 31, 2023

To:Funsui

Half truth and yet they still get stuck on half the lie smh 😭 I love how the Harruchin nickname stuck with you 😁

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Aug 31, 2023

To:NightWriter

He’s not sure if he wants to be honest or not 🥲 my bro wasn’t ready yet! 😭 And yes Congats Yoru! Your guess was half right, so here’s a whole cookie 🍪 (I’m generous)

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Aug 31, 2023

To:Deleted User

I don’t like misunderstandings either ngl so I only used it as a way for them to get closer 😤 Yuuya-san bro is a menace 😭

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Aug 31, 2023

To:kazesenken

That would have ended in Haruhi dying a horribly brutal death be sure of it Kaze 💀 Haruhi 2005 - 2023 🪦

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Aug 31, 2023

To:ryba

Haruhi bout to be the best marathon runner you’ve ever seen 🏃

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Aug 31, 2023

To:Funsui

How many horror stories can get you terrified?
Ichika: YES
Ikemen village 🧟‍♂️
Sumi pulled out her last resort… Seduce my bro 😭 Or just kiss him 👍

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Aug 31, 2023

To:IceDonut

Bro Donut as always you’re spot on 👏👏 Plus I like to think Sumi is more courageous in the romance department in comparison to Ichika who doesn’t act reserved but actually is 😅 Since Sumi is actually more popular, thus better social skills 👍

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Aug 31, 2023

Ryota kiss (GOOOOOOOOOOL) 😘 White day chocolate 🍫 And it ends exactly how it began 😇 WELCOME TO THE WHIMSICAL MATCHMAKING BRIGADE! 🥳
Congrats for finishing Koyo! This story was a very nice light hearted piece and despite your previous entry being seriously action packed I think you handled the SoL parts very well 👍 The mystery parts were pretty nice too, while the whole premise of the mystery solving club intrigued me from the start 🕵️‍♂️ Mai was probably one of the most fun characters to read (her teasing maaan 😭) alongside Sato, who let’s face it bro was such a lovely menace 🤣 I also appreciated Ryota’s mystery solving aspects 🫡
The single feedback I would have for you is that sometimes, especially in the first chapters, some descriptions of situations dragged out so long the whole chapter was 80% descriptions and only 20% dialogue. If you manage to take that to heart and improve on it, I think your SoL will be even more enjoyable 👍 This is a personal opinion however, you don’t need to change anything if you don’t feel like it! I think the Whimsical matchmaking brigade was a very fun read nonetheless ❤️ Thanks for writing and good luck Koyo!

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