Aug 01, 2023

Oh man, otoo-san and Takuro bonding over movies you love to see it 🥹 And this group feels like it would be the best to be around I can just feel it man 😤 Also for a moment, I thought they were sitting inside the fountain, so I found that both weird and cute… but, I guess yeah lake sounds better 🤧
Also, WOW man! Yes! Ashiya’s struggle there felt so real, like she knows she’s being overshadowed by Kukai, and although it’s not exactly a plus to her as a character (for me it is, cause realistic 👍) it adds another layer to her personality ❤️
Lovely chapter again my friend! 🫡

P.S. Not Kanaoka okaa-san 😭 That’s from last year! Isato my boy where you at 😭

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Aug 01, 2023

I’m not crying! These are tears of joy I swear! 😭 joy for what you ask? I don’t know 😭
Where should I start? The whole festive feel? The kites with the bubuls? The dance? The Jun Claire hug? Oh man I bet she needed that hug for a long long time 😭
You know the dance with Mia kinda gave me the, I like you, I respect you, but not the “I’m madly in love with you” vibe, at least from Jun’s perspective 🧐 Maybe Mia’s too? Inserting a certain cat boy into the mix? 🐱 Toren chasing the bubbles in a suit tho… now I can’t get that mental image out of my head 😭 but why would I?
Oh man I don’t want us to go down the “Stab your heart a thousand times and step on it” route, I mean come on forgetting about Claire? 🥹 We need a dance rewind! 😤 Somebody play the guitar again! 😤
I can feel it, we’ve come this far boys! Next chapter is gonna be the one… or next of the next 😤 or the next of the next of the next 😤 We’ll wait for as long as it takes! (A couple hundred years? 👀) Thanks for writing Mina! Thursday… 🔜

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Aug 01, 2023

Bro this is heartbreaking! No don’t kill our boy man, for real 😭😭😭 He just fell down a cliff! Just a cliffhanger (Mina where you at?) plenty of people do that 😭 and it wasn’t even THAT high! 😭 Kids got dates to go on man! 😭 Also quick aside… didn’t Nao make a contract with Inari too? 🧐 will she go through the same trial or are her circumstances different? 🧐
Man these Gods tho seem very intimidating, kinda like Juanchon in front of goal (not even close man jokes), I think you did great in portraying them 🧐 I could feel the aura emanating man! When they dissed each other about their origins I was just like Takashi 🤓 uhm let us in? What snakes and rice? 🤓
But what contract tho? 🧐 this needs mandatory 🧐 It’s a deal! We’re making a deal! 🧐 Inari please man, save everyone again 🙏🏻 I pray to you 🙏🏻🦊
#BIGGESTINARIGANGEVER
Thanks for writing Shu bro! This just keeps getting more interesting 🫡❤️

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Aug 01, 2023

To:IceDonut

It would be very appreciated a stadium pic is still a stadium pic! 🫡

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Aug 01, 2023

Grace the nurse! 😤 adorable 😤 I didn’t expect that realization at the end tho, bro wants to go down the normie route 😭 Moms will be moms too, im glad she’s caring to Haru despite her being away for work most of the time 🤝

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Aug 01, 2023

Oh okay, so Konya plays for the opposite team huh? 🤔 This is getting even more interesting! And it's a nice detail and plot point how the fact he is a "child of death" influences his personality from a "good boy" to a "bad boy" 🤔 He done roasted that girl too daaaamn 😂

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Aug 01, 2023

Finally some answers let's gooo! I love this concept, with Eros and death and all that 🤩 Kinda makes me wonder how Konya fits into all this tho... he must be "special" too right? 🤔

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Aug 01, 2023

Alice has seen the future, she knows and she jealous! 😎 OR she is seeing the lines between them maybe? Like Kiyoshi did with his crush and that ikemen? Yeah that might be more plausible 😂

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Aug 01, 2023

Ryota was about to faint back at the clothing shop, but he must have been kinda let down Mai didn't try a cosplay costume I'm sure 😂 CAT CAFE THO! 🤩 Best thing ever... Now let's see if Mai adopts one, cause that would be adorable man... 🙏

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Jul 31, 2023

To:IceDonut

Doctor Donut has given the green light! Haruhi will live! 🫡 Thanks doc 👨‍⚕️
Ohhh Dortmund! 😤 As a massive football fan I want to visit Signal Iduna Park at least once in my life, because I’ve heard it’s one of the most atmospheric stadiums in world football, so I’m kinda envious you have it so close by, but big up Donut! 🫡 You have my respect! Traffic jams suck indeed, and trains are just so packed nobody can breath 😭 I admit that may need a little work 🤣 just recently I went to a concert here in Greece and missed the last train (70k audience) had to wait for 1 hour and a half to find a taxi cause of the sheer amount of people needing to find one 🤧 And to answer your question in a roundabout way, yes I do support Eintracht! I’ve got family living in Germany, so when we visited my uncle took me to The Commerzbank Arena and I’ve loved the team ever since 😅 Not to mention they share the same crest (eagle) and colours (black and white) with the Greek team I support and I’m crazy for 🤝 (PAOK)
If you ever go to the stadium again, send me some pics please 🙏🏻

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Jul 31, 2023

To:minatika

Ichika doesn’t know why the hell they’re kicking a ball around and trying to put it in a fishing net held up by poles, but she still came to support 😭💪🏻
Haruhi has the innate ikemen ability, causes taunt to activate and all opponents to attack him (mostly singles tho) 👊🏻
Thankfully, it’s not as bad as it seems, or so Doctor Katsu 👨‍⚕️ (waiting for doctor Donut too) says 🧐 But yes he’ll probably be out of commission for some time 🤣
Ichika will have her (revenge) moment to shine, or at least I believe so 🤧
Thanks for reading as always Mina! #LoveSorceressGang ❤️

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Jul 30, 2023

To:IceDonut

Doctor Donut is on the case now too! 👨‍⚕️ what do you reckon Doc? Is it bad? 🧐 I’ve had my fair share of similar moments in football too (thankfully not very serious) so Haruhi isn’t gonna be on the sidelines for very long 🤝 just enough to hit “our goal” I guess… 😉
Although I thank you for that statement my friend, since I kind of tried to keep the play by play light (didn’t succeed 😂) and wanted non-football fans to enjoy… NOT A FOOTBALL ENTHUSIAST?! My German friend, I am slightly disappointed (don’t worry we bros) in that 🥲 AYE EINTRACHT FRANKFURT SALALALALA AYE EINTRACHT FRANKFURT SALALALALAAAA 🦅 okay I’m stopping now 😂 don’t you have a favourite team tho? Your league is one of the best 🫡
Thanks for reading Donut! ❤️

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Jul 30, 2023

To:Kitsune

Rice Krispies… OUCH! 😭 Damn I’ve never played American football, but I can imagine the injuries! (although I’d rather not 🤣) Hope you didn’t get any nasty ones Kit 🫡 I have bad experiences with my ankles and football myself so, I don’t wish that on anyone 🥲
Ichika transition from tsundere to yandere? 👀 nah I think no one would wanna see that 🤣
Thanks for reading Kit! ❤️

P.S. I may or may not have misspelled Pom pom on purpose 😎

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Jul 30, 2023

To:Deleted User

Luckily not all cracky sounds or feels mean broken 🤝 so he will be able to enjoy summer vacation later down the line 🧐
That jealous midfielder might mysteriously find himself waking up in a dark room tomorrow… 🔪 Haha, sadly tho, the challenge was outside the box so no penalty 😭
Thanks for reading Tomo! ❤️

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Jul 30, 2023

Oh man this story is so weirdly poetic sometimes 😭 The atmosphere is so light and fun, but the dialogue between Ashiya and Takuro really feels “on-point” and exactly as it should be if that makes sense 👏 I love Kukai too tho, peppy energetic characters are my weakness 😭
And what a bro moment! Damn! Asahiro is cool bro bro 🤝 Blackmail tho? ICHIKA GET OUT OF ASHIYA’S MIND! 😤
Your chapters are rather short, but they always seem to hit the spot my friend! Great work! ❤️

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