I'm a 19 year old boy trying to write decent readable short form novels. Any criticism is great, as it will make my writing even better if I get more comments. Hope everyone, that deserves it is having a nice day inshallah.
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Things about me: Asian (Chinese), Libra (Oct 15.)
Current Writing Project: Link-Up-Play
(Treating everyone with some love with a 👍)
I do watch anime, but I mostly read manga now as I'm much more busy than when I was young.
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Socials ↓
Carrd - https://renzed.carrd.co/
Anilist - https://anilist.co/user/RenZed/
Last.fm - https://www.last.fm/user/RenZeded
Discord - xiaoyren
Hello!! This is Alfir speaking! It's not like a bio needs a mic check, but meh~ I am doing it anyway... mic check, mic check, this is Alfir do you copy? Noob author on the mic over.
My demands are small--- read my work, give me some honey, do some comments, make our lives a bit livelier, give me honey again, smile, don't forget to follow...
Aaaaah... That's too much ain't it? Well, suit yourself, and have a happy reading.
I am not forcing you, really...
It's not like I'll kidnap your relatives and stuff them into a bag, and drop them in a river with a boulder on top of 'em... really... It's not like I can hack into the net and extrapolate your location from their... really... Just saying, read my novels... or not?
•ﻌ• Female/Asian
•ﻌ• Fond of Girls Love/Yuri stories
•ﻌ• Adore cats
•ﻌ• First novel written: Unconsciously Interested
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*Clears throat* Aherm!
Having just started writing and with much to learn as well, I'm not really sure how to offer constructive comments to a story, so I probably won't give any critical remarks if I happen to read your story (maybe just a suggestion if I feel like I need to).
Moreover, I'm not a native English speaker. (⁎⁀⎵⁀⁎) Reading a story only puts me into reader and supporter mode, not a critic.
Nevertheless, I seriously read stories, and sticking to them means I like them.
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I do all the artworks of my novels, but I’m not really skilled at doing digital art, so please cut me some slack if the images aren’t up to your standard.
Also, sharing and liking my work would be greatly appreciated. It will serve as a source of inspiration for me as I continue to work on it.
Arigatō gozaimasu. . . (✧▾✧)
-Yuri influencer- Bwahaha..
I'm here to support my personal
friend [[ muishiki ]] on her novel journey.
Follow her and you'll gain a follower & a reader in me, too.
• Freelance Writer
• Gamer and lead editor of Couch Co-op Co.
• Co-founder & writer from Ethereal Entertainment (Web-comics)
https://linktr.ee/kidosan97
Hello! Though I'm a writer myself, personal circumstances currently limit me from contributing anything written. For now, I'm super interested to review and critique works on here, helping motivate aspiring writers.
Feel free to contact me if you want to have your work looked at too. It'll be a pleasure working with you. :)
21, shut-in, American.
Perpetually residing in a hell of my own creation. You can reach me on Discord @Vforest.
I do voice acting now! Link’s on the home button.
Paperback copies of Yesterhead are available for purchase on Amazon.
Just a University student with time for homework and anime.
Here I bring you a world of dreams and myth. Fantasy Life is a story of how five children compete in intense games, battle creatures of legends, and discover an unknown secret to how mythical creatures came to be. Join these students as they grow to learn more about the fantastical world around them.
