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Aug 30, 2022
To:Xiellion
That I can agree, I think the plot in Cullgrade especially is pretty nonsensical and could use a lot more, haha. If I had more time/a bigger word count I'd definitely go through and change a lot of stuff.
Still though, I am really happy you got something out of the story, and I hope it was enjoyable overall! You really do honour me by saying you could even take some inspiration from Cullgrade!
Yes. Good point to close things off. Azama > All
I had to add it back one way or the other 😎
Yeah that is true! Maybe for the future, haha. And yeah, Azama definitely gets some style points!
Aug 29, 2022
To:Deleted User
Alrighty then! I'll make sure to keep that in mind
Haha thanks! Hopefully it wasn't too much of a sludge to get through, heh. I definitely rushed some parts of it due to word count/the impending time limit of the competition, haha. But still, I appreciate you reading through it nonetheless.
Thank you to anyone who read up until this point, heh. It's not quite done (might add short filler chapters/rewrite/re-edit), but it is for the most part! In the meantime, I'll probably be working on Blood Blue (a martial arts story) and Warden of Success (a LitRPG).
Thank you to everyone yet again!
Aug 28, 2022
Haha, I'm happy you found it enjoyable!
Well, I hope it's enjoyable at least, heh. Even if it did just kinda come out of nowhere, haha
Yeah! They'll show them!
Glad to see someone got the reference!
Aug 27, 2022
Ah, the end is nearing, I can feel it (and definitely not cause I read the chapter's title). Do continue Makech! We're all waiting to see how this concludes!
Aug 26, 2022
That it is!
To:Makech
😎
Haha, if I wasn't approaching the word count I would've make a actual fight scene, but I suppose this'll do!
I ended up making Jaiga not maul Ceylica after all, so the whole premise got changed. I thought it made more sense, heh. So, rest in piece cake line 😭
True, true. I’m working on a schedule, heh. Got like 10k words left to use.
Indeed, that we do!
Well. I completely changed how the conversation and chapter went so it wasn’t applicable anymore, haha.
Aug 25, 2022
To:Armorien
See* See* not say!
