Jan 25, 2026
To:Earlo_18
First of all, great work on getting it done! It takes a lot of effort to write a novel much less when you're subjected to the conditions you went through, so good on you for doing it! Typos honestly aren't that important I feel as long as the overall story is fine!
You did a great work on the story! I thought it was quite enjoyable, with Talmarius and Kuro being some of my personal highlights. The ending feels a bit sudden to be honest, and I think there could be more, but I don't think it's bad either.
Keep on writing Earlo!