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Jun 14, 2022

Breasts certainly are two somewhat big concerns for Eiji if anything

My First and Last Kiss Was With You

Chapter:5

Jun 14, 2022

I wanna say the rooms are either really small or really really big as to warrant such a reaction. The former would definitely be funny, but also a bit sad if anything.

Y: The Tides Are In Our Hearts

Chapter:3

Jun 14, 2022

To:Deleted User

Thank you!

Cullgrade

Chapter:1

Jun 14, 2022

'For legal reasons, it's probably best I did anyway' is a really nice meta line lmao. Good work, Akua. There's some real insight into the nature of their relationship here.

My Childhood Best Friend is a VTuber! (OsananaV)

Chapter:11

Jun 13, 2022

The contrast between the deep monologue and commentary on base entertainment against the title of the LN is hilarious. Excellent setup with good payoff.

My First and Last Kiss Was With You

Chapter:1

Jun 13, 2022

Lovely opening, the way it's presented and interspersed with keywords and continued with a paragraph is exquisite.

Are You Real?

Chapter:1

Jun 13, 2022

Ah, that description of Kimiko's cat movement is wonderful. You can really envision it in the moment, and dialogue is great too, it comes off as natural yet witty at the same time. Perfect for the type of story you're telling.

Anything but Boring!

Chapter:3

Jun 13, 2022

To:Playing_Koi

I'm glad you liked it! Azama certainly is a enigmatic figure if anything, and I hope you enjoy what is to come! Hopefully some more insight into his character, will come through in future conversations and whatnot!

And I'm glad you liked the line too, it is a very nice one indeed!

Cullgrade

Chapter:2

Jun 13, 2022

To:Hungry Sheep

Oh my, what the compliment! I'll certainly try to keep it up.

Cullgrade

Chapter:2

Jun 13, 2022

Ah to experience such long periods of time in such a short duration. Surely such a product has no drawback. Surely?

Slumbers

Chapter:1

Jun 13, 2022

As always Akua, you've managed to combine witty metaphors, weeb culture, and well flowing prose all in one text and chapter. Excellent work, the combination of comedy and character makes for a most compelling piece of work! Keep it up!

My Childhood Best Friend is a VTuber! (OsananaV)

Chapter:10

Jun 12, 2022

Not sure why, but the description of her hair at the start was really funny! I loved the way you elaborated on her hair and personality.

Anything but Boring!

Chapter:1

Jun 10, 2022

Very nice! I do love myself an watery opening, the way you capture the feel of the ocean and Miieie's reaction to it all is very pleasant to read. Keep it up!

Y: The Tides Are In Our Hearts

Chapter:1

Jun 09, 2022

To:epicene

Hehe, you should've seen the original draft! It was just non-stop monologuing. To be honest, I do feel like I should break it up a bit more, but I struggle too at times! That being said, I do hope you enjoy the upcoming interactions with his students!

Cullgrade

Chapter:1

Jun 09, 2022

To:Playing_Koi

Aw, that means a lot to me, thank you very much! I'll try to keep the same wit and energy throughout!

Cullgrade

Chapter:1

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