Sep 02, 2022
To:AWiddleStar
Thank you for that! Haha, I suppose writing in the moment is my biggest strength, so long as you don't think too hard about what it implies in the overall story. Though hopefully I can fix this in the future.
I won't lie, that the class part was executed pretty poorly. Someone actually told me they'd rather I write the whole story in third person and shift away from Azama, so that was part of the reason why I had done so. And while I don't think that was inherently a bad idea, I do definitely think that I didn't do it well, at all, haha. So I definitely agree with you on these points.
Still, I'm really happy that you managed to go through the whole thing! The fact you find the individual scenes to be enjoyable really do mean a lot to me! While I'm definitely lacking in 'plot' and narrative coherence compared to a lot of other works, I am hoping my characterization and flair can carry the story, haha.
Thank you once again!
