Jul 06, 2022
To:Ana Fowl
I didn't think of it like that, honestly I just named the chapter after Iris' hallucinations but you pretty much got it bang on the nail with how Iris doesn't feel like she fits into this hyper streamlined "function-over-form" type society 😃
One small addendum though, the age of metal is a term the characters use to refer to a vague time period way before City of Flowers takes place. It has some plot relevance, so I've chosen to purposefully keep it obtuse but if it's not clear that the age of metal was in the past I'd appreciate it if you could point if out to me so I can fix it >_<