Aug 12, 2023
To:ChronoSigma
Bold words are usually loud/pronounced differnly/angrily said; and for the 'Children' part, they're 18, but the world's legal age is 21 (I think I have it there somewhere, if not then it's an error I will fix.)
Ayama and Akiro are Manga-readers/Gamers. I don't think I explained that perfectly on the prolouge. I'll fix that.
As for the abrubt introduction of Characters, I will address that plot hole soon in future chapters, thank you for your insight😊
Please keep commenting on anything that needs to be fixed, I would love to improve upon them.