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Xan Ti

Depressed.
Update 03/12/2022: Sorry... The disease progressed. It can't be cured. I've been given a min and a max time. I'll let the end for my stories written for my family to publish if the worst happens. I'll keep trying to fulfill my dream of being published until the end. Thanks.

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Aug 28, 2022

To:muishiki

Wish you the best too!! Hope you enjoyed the novel at least for a bit ❤️ I will be judging at rom-coms!! Good thing I've been reading your short and it's parent story!! Will finish reading them next week🤗 Have to read lots of other entries too!! I'll be completely honest with my reviews

B.U.T.H.O / ブットホ

Chapter:30

Aug 28, 2022

To:Tomoyuki

Thanks for the grammar correction!!
I thought that at the end I added more prose, but apparently not. The next chapter has Butagami describing things 👍 It's not like I can't or I don't want to. But I don't have too much time to be very descriptive now!! I wrote 7 (3000ish words) chapters in 2 weeks. I don't want to die 😭

Sakuragami Syndrome

Chapter:15

Aug 27, 2022

Added for judge process 🤗 Will read it on the upcoming days!! ❤️

Why is the Trip to the Demon World Never Peaceful?!

Chapter:0

Aug 27, 2022

To:Tomoyuki

I just read the next 2 chapters and they have prose in them. But just the normal amount the novel has had on previous chapters!! I think that I unconsciously wrote it after these last 2 chapters filled with dialog and thoughts 😅

Sakuragami Syndrome

Chapter:14

Aug 27, 2022

To:Tomoyuki

Yeah, the writing style of this novel lacks prose. My other novel has way more than this. I wanted to write this one in a more dialogic way. As you can see, I use a lot of sound effects and *MALEVOLENT STARE* kind of things instead of using prose to describe the faces the characters are making (like on my other novel). I made it like this because I had not much time. Obviously, it makes it harder to describe situations and action scenes 😅 I definitely learned from your words.

Sakuragami Syndrome

Chapter:14

Aug 27, 2022

To:Tomoyuki

I will use this experience to learn a lot about my mistakes!! I'm sorry that my writing gets confusing hahaha I could solve that problem just by using the "Kira: Blabla. Manami: Yes." Just putting the names of who's talking before. But I think the way I did can make people to be more focused to know who said what. Or maybe they get angry at me and stop reading 😅 Thank you for your words!! God?? Are you using your future sight?? 😜The final is near. As you wished, Butagami is starting to use his brain 😆

Sakuragami Syndrome

Chapter:14

Aug 27, 2022

To:Tomoyuki

I know it gets confusing. I tried my best to distinguish them. For example, Manami's second personality refers to Butagami with kun and Kira without honorifics. Main Manami refers to Butagami without honorifics and Kira with the kun. Butagami calls Manami-sama to her second and Manami-san to her psycopath personality. As for Kira, he goes with Manami-shit and Manami-shit-2 hahaha Chizaki refers to Kira with the chan. But yeah. Because of the writing style, it gets confusing. Second personalities speak with the *Centered* and when 2 of them appear at the same scene it gets confusing. It would be better with images. This way of writing is not the best for the novel media. But I'm running out of time!! I needed to write it like that 😞I will try to make it clearer if I have time!!
I know what you mean. Because I put dialog between the action it pauses it and loses tension. Just consider it as my inexperience at writing!!

Sakuragami Syndrome

Chapter:14

Aug 27, 2022

To:Tomoyuki

A dear friend!!❤️

B.U.T.H.O / ブットホ

Chapter:31

Aug 27, 2022

To:Tomoyuki

Definitely! I will be reading rom-coms and chilling 🤗

Sakuragami Syndrome

Chapter:13

Aug 27, 2022

To:Tomoyuki

You are right. Health is the most important thing. And I had a lot of fun writing my stories!! There are way more people with better prose and experience than me, so I was aware that winning or making it to the finals would be almost impossible. I did it to prove to myself that I can do anything, even if it's hard!! Don't worry, it obviously took sleep time and energy from me, but not like I was sick because of it. I just felt dizzy a couple of times 😅

Sakuragami Syndrome

Chapter:13

Aug 27, 2022

To:Tomoyuki

Absolutely!! For the last 14 days, I wrote 7 chapters. 1500 words per day, including translating, reading and fixing mistakes, then grammar check, and reading one last time!! I'm sure that you know the pressure that that puts not only on your body but on your mind!! There's been days were I ended up dizzy for not sleeping well, because I can't stop thinking about dialogs and things I need to portray while I'm in bed😅 And I need to note them to write it next day. I know you also did something similar, I know you understand me. Thank you for all your comments and for reading my story!! Today will be a double chapter!! Sadly, one of them is similar to this one. I needed a lot of dialog and thoughts to reveal a lot of things. The final is coming, and I needed to explain lots of things!! Don't worry, the narrator will come again in a way you won't ever expect😆

Sakuragami Syndrome

Chapter:13

Aug 26, 2022

To:Tomoyuki

I know how you may feel. I'm not you, obviously. But we all get trought bad times. Some more than others for sure. Don't let it break you. I don't know you. But you deserve best👍

B.U.T.H.O / ブットホ

Chapter:31

Aug 26, 2022

To:Tomoyuki

You are completely right there. I happen not to find any situatin to do it. As for how the writing style of the novel is, I hit a wall there. This is a chapter of a series of one scene. It happens that right now it's all action and dialog. The previous chapter described the situation, and the next one will be interactions between characters (dialogs and fights). I couldn't find a space for prose there. Anyway, in the next chapters (that are coming daily) there is prose. Sorry for the bad experience of reading it 😓

Sakuragami Syndrome

Chapter:13

Aug 26, 2022

To:Tomoyuki

Hope the best for you and for everyone!! May everyone have a life with no regrets, filled with happiness!! Dream on, my friends. That's what brave people do.

B.U.T.H.O / ブットホ

Chapter:31

Aug 26, 2022

To:Tomoyuki

Indeed. Who knows why Akira did all that. Is he good?? Bad?? A war is about to reach to the world, and Ano is exactly where he wanted to be to unify the world. A lot of people from different factions will get in his way. I have already noted ideas!!! Now, without the stress of a deadline, I will be able to work without pressure and I will apply all I learned in these months to my writing!! Thanks for reading and for giving me your feedback!!! I feel that the ending was a bit risky because it did not explain in detail what happened. But it's a good door for a continuation!!

Preparing myself to read rom-coms 😆

B.U.T.H.O / ブットホ

Chapter:30