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Dec 19, 2024

10,000 dragons pff, I don't think I have even killed 10,000 flies in my life and those are easy. Better start using the nukes! This is quite an interesting setting, modern day but with dragons and swords. I think the pacing could be a bit slower, I feel too much was happening at the same time at some points.

Slaying 10,000 Dragons

Chapter:1

Dec 13, 2024

To:Steward McOy

Clarice can do a lot more interesting stuff than that, I promise 😉

Isekai Cleanup Service

Chapter:4

Dec 12, 2024

Quite a lot happening in the first chapter! Wish you the best of luck with this book, all the time travel stuff would be really daunting for me as a writer. I will get to contradict myself in no time 🕛

Chrono Knight

Chapter:0

Dec 11, 2024

Nice start! Reminds me a bit of a black mirror episode.

Memoria

Chapter:1

Dec 11, 2024

To:Hype

Thank you, I hope I grabbed your attention with that "twist"

Isekai Cleanup Service

Chapter:3

Dec 10, 2024

Fun start! I'm glad to hear Prime is still around, Jeff Bezos would love that! I think you described the premise well, I'm looking forward to seeing the story evolve!

Hi Flyers!

Chapter:1

Dec 10, 2024

Great chapter! The concept is interesting, I like slice-of-life-type stories. I am a bit uncertain about the tone, it reads a bit like a comedy but your tags say drama. I think what may help is to add some extra descriptions, describe their posture, how the ramen shop looks in an apocalyptic word, and how the food smells / tastes.

Usagi Days (Space Orcs Destroyed the Earth So Let's Deliver Packages in a Pink Kei-Car)

Chapter:1

Dec 09, 2024

I'm afraid of humans aswell... sometimes atleast... Interesting to see cat people have adopted the word incel 😆

Neko Nuke Nightmare

Chapter:1

Dec 03, 2024

Exciting start, a lot is happening for sure. More questions than answers but I guess that is to be expected for a first chapter. Your writing style is quite vivid, nice work!

Yumix; Unveiled [Vol01]

Chapter:1

Dec 03, 2024

To:Steward McOy

Thank you! I did my best to revision it after the feedback I got

Isekai Cleanup Service

Chapter:1

Dec 02, 2024

After the Seven Bridges of Königsberg, this year it's time for another classic: The ship of Theseus. No joking, I think this chapter sets up the concept of the story well, with a bit of a surprise at the end. (shifting the perspective to another character)

Neko Nuke Nightmare

Chapter:0

Jun 16, 2024

To:otkrlj

Thank you so much for your comment. I am glad you liked my story!

1001 Origami Cranes

Chapter:1

Jan 03, 2024

To:Taylor J

Thank you a lot, I tried my best to make something wholesome. Yeah, that's a reference to the Dragon Ball song, yes. (and the amazing Lucky Star cover)

Mona's Christmas

Chapter:3

Dec 23, 2023

To:Taylor J

Thank you for checking out my chapter!

Mona's Christmas

Chapter:1

Oct 02, 2023

Haha, that first line of the synopsis already had me laughing 😂
Nice chapter, I like the showdown

Mahou Shoujo Marina: I’ll Do Anything for J̵u̵s̵t̵i̵c̵e̵ Attention!

Chapter:1

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