Dec 10, 2024
Great chapter! The concept is interesting, I like slice-of-life-type stories. I am a bit uncertain about the tone, it reads a bit like a comedy but your tags say drama. I think what may help is to add some extra descriptions, describe their posture, how the ramen shop looks in an apocalyptic word, and how the food smells / tastes.
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