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Hello! I'm an aspiring novelist, just writing to write. I go by ChampionAsh5357 or Ash Kels as an alias.

registered at: May 24, 2022

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Feb 21, 2025

To:Lucid Levia

Yep yep, though this time within the bounds of plausibility... probably.

Until the Clock Winds Down

Chapter:2

Jan 10, 2025

To:Lucid Levia

Tbh, didn't think about that at all since what they were doing was outlined before the MC was added in. Though, the original draft had the MC and Ai playing card games for the entire night.

The Chair is Magic!?

Chapter:24

Jan 07, 2025

I just hope someone invents a mana-efficient dishwasher in this universe soon :p

I am but a Cloud, Floating from Place to Place

Chapter:21

Nov 26, 2024

To:Lucid Levia

Tbh, I completely forgot that was a cliche. My brain was just like 'tolerances!' and so it came to be.

I am but a Cloud, Floating from Place to Place

Chapter:18

Oct 29, 2024

To:Lucid Levia

I hope you don't mind, but that's such a great line that I'm going to borrow it.

Chaos! At the Halloween Festival

Chapter:14

Oct 29, 2024

To:Lucid Levia

In the original 'choose your own adventure' that I wrote this for, the Crimson Devastation was basically a person so obsessed with research that she basically didn't care about anything else, which was why she didn't bother with clothes. The only reason she put on the lab coat was that the slightly chilled wind from being so high was a bit too distracting.

I am but a Cloud, Floating from Place to Place

Chapter:15

Oct 22, 2024

To:Lucid Levia

Yep, I just thought of it as a visualization issue since people heavily rely on their eyes.

The Chair is Magic!?

Chapter:12

Oct 15, 2024

To:Lucid Levia

I tried to think of the most Western thing that could be considered chunibyo, and that instantly came to my mind.

And yeah, the multiple quotations means multiple people are saying it, one per person with a max of four for a group. That's how I learned to express it anyway. No idea if there's a better way.

Chaos! At the Halloween Festival

Chapter:7

Oct 09, 2024

To:Lucid Levia

No worries! It only gets more chaotic from here :p

Chaos! At the Halloween Festival

Chapter:4

Oct 06, 2024

To:Lucid Levia

Yep yep. All the stories take place in the same world, so the history and plot for each are interwoven. With how much I've written so far, a lot of the stories will have one or two plot points from another.

Though, of course, you shouldn't need to know the other stories to enjoy this one. It's just purely for worldbuilding this giant universe of at least 100 stories I'm going for.

Heart of Blood

Chapter:2

Oct 06, 2024

To:Lucid Levia

As I may come back to this story in the future, I will say it's a mix of both. I thought about elaborating further, but I only have so much time with a short story.

Heart of Blood

Chapter:4

Oct 06, 2024

To:Lucid Levia

Yep, definitely strange. The look came from the original, when they were what I could only describe as a 'casual observer' of the world.

Sorry if that made no sense: the original I'm referring to would be from the 'Mixing Market', though, it's not necessary to read that to enjoy this story (though I'm happy you have).

Heart of Blood

Chapter:2

Sep 02, 2024

To:Lucid Levia

It's best not to question it. I'm sure our MC will a get a handle on themself...eventually!

I am but a Cloud, Floating from Place to Place

Chapter:12

Aug 10, 2024

To:lolitroy

Thanks! I'll use that to better improve these chapters and future ones. It's always interesting trying to edit the first story I wrote over a year ago and seeing how much I've changed since then.

The Chair is Magic!?

Chapter:1

Aug 01, 2024

To:Lucid Levia

To be fair, I had a similar thought, but I couldn't think of what kind of magic would look interesting. I just need to quickly improve my drawing skills!

The Chair is Magic!?

Chapter:0

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