Jul 01, 2023
To:The Monotone Puppet
Thanks for your comment :) I'm happy you enjoyed it. Currently I'm just gonna leave the chapter as is 'cause I'm focussing on making new stuff, but once I have this wrapped up in a few chapters I'll do a re-write incorporating your feedback (and in general I'll take your advice on using facial expressions and voice forward into the next few chapters)
Coliseum is actually not a grmmar mistake, by the way! A coliseum is actually a generic term for Colosseum-like arenas/theatres, whereas Colosseum is actually the specific amphitheatre in Rome. I didn't know this either before writing this chapter.
