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Jul 26, 2022

To:Katsuhito

Hahaha I know what you mean 😅
Okay firstly my dear author thank you so much for reading the prologue of my first book, to be very honest I was really looking forward to the review of one of my favourite authors on this plarform 😊
Secondly, thank you for thinking so, I tried to present Aradia as that cocky, playful and comedic character who also has a dark and frightening side to her when triggered, so i'm really happy that you liked that and I promise to keep the tone light and entertaining but also add a little action where it's necessary 😉
Unfortunately it will be a while before Lucifer is revealed but until then I hope I can keep you entertained and I hope you enjoy what I have in store 😊
But yes thank you so, so much for the review, the comment and the vote it really means a lot ❤️❤️

His Unknown Spawn

Chapter:0

Jul 25, 2022

To:IceDonut

Hahaha yes tis I Bikergirlhacker, reader and now writer 😉😂 thank you for reading and giving this book a go, firstly I was so nervous while writing and secondly I realise that what I wrote might sound confusing so just to clarify what I meant was the Lucifer was cast out of Heaven and he became the God of Hell as we all know 😅 but he decided to take a vacation in spite of his Dad who we know is God, and he cut off his wings to really show that he's had enough and he wants to start fresh, but as soon as he cut his wings one feather becomes Aradia (it's not really how the story goes this is just fiction 😅) but I hope that's a little bit more clearer now, really sorry if it sounded confusing before, but thank you for reading and next one will be good 😅 also yes Aradia is really strong and about the quotation marks, I guess I just find that easier but i'll keep in mind to use the.. double quotations?? 😂 basically the " instead of the ' so yeah, but thank you for the feedback 😊❤️

His Unknown Spawn

Chapter:0

Jul 25, 2022

Hehehe it was truly an honour and my greatest pleasure to read this book Mr. Author and I cannot wait to see what you have in store next xxx

Blue Memory

Chapter:25

Jul 25, 2022

Oh My Goddddddd! That last chapter made me smile and this one made me teary, it was perfect! Ahhh just perfect, I swear from beginning, middle to the end, this book has been perfect and just when I thought it couldn't get any better the next chapter came and boom I was blow away, honestly this has to be one of my most favourite books of all time, not only becuase I love the ocean myself, but also becuase I fell in love with the characters, the writing, the storyline, everything about it was... magical somehow, and honestly I can't wait to read many more of your books Mr. Author, you rocked, this book rocked and the entire concept of the summer vibes, I couldn't have thought of a better ending, and like I said, I thought the previous chapter was amazing, but this one blew me away, round of applauds for you whooooooooooo! ❤️❤️❤️

Blue Memory

Chapter:24

Jul 25, 2022

Ohhhhhhh yessssssss!!!!! Ahhh I was doing my happy dance while reading this chapter finally finally finally they both confessed like CONFESSED ahhhhhh i'm so happy, literally I cannot stop smiling! hahaha, awesome one Mr. Author, really and truly, I swear i'm so soo sooooo happy, like ahh I can't contain it, eeeeeeeeek

Blue Memory

Chapter:23

Jul 24, 2022

I would love to go to that club honestly, it looks so cool, I mean anything including tech is cool, like come on don't deny it haha, but still the whole atmosphere just hits home, also I would be surprised if our protagonist didn't know about Dos and DDoS like honestly I was like 'Come on mate you better know this' in my head and he did, phew! Alsooooooo Ando-sensei is backkkkk, I can't wait to see what happens next, as always amazing chapter Mr. Author looking forward to the next one😁❤️

Root Access

Chapter:10

Jul 23, 2022

To:Katsuhito

Emi and Granny are both MVPs ❤️❤️❤️ oh and the profile pic is 🥵😍

Blue Memory

Chapter:22

Jul 23, 2022

YOU TWO UTTER DONUTSSSSS!!!! I swear I was yelling at my phone screen 😅 I was like, Yukio get a grip! Go talk to her! I could have told you that yesterday! Run faster you idiot!!!!! And Hana I love you girlie pop but if you don't leave your room I swear I will kick down your door and drag you out so you guys can talk face to face not face to door! Ugh! Kids these days man! They're BOTH at fault Hana for keeping him in the dark regarding her New York decision and Yukio needs to keep his temper in check 🤦🏻‍♀️ but honestly they're my OTP I can't stay mad at them for long, I love them to bits and I just want them to be happy 🥺 Anyways another awesome chapter Mr. Author and I am really looking forward to the next one 😊❤️

Blue Memory

Chapter:22

Jul 21, 2022

Wow! Thank you so much for ripping my heart out and stepping on it repeatedly while separating my OTP in front of me! He got his memories back, great! She's blaming herself, not so great! He's moving back to Tokyo, horrible! She's permanently moving to New York, that's just brutal! That's it? Seriously? Okay enough of that I guess, like always great chapter and see you in the next one.

Blue Memory

Chapter:21

Jul 20, 2022

To:IceDonut

Oh noooo I forgot about Lynx i'm so sorry 🥺 okay maybeee she's not the love interest since I think it might be Lynx or it might not be Lynx 🤔 okay now i'm confused 😖 but i'm sure whatever you have in store IceDonut-san it's gonna be amazing 😊❤️
P.s. please don't thank me like I said you deserve the praise ❤️

Root Access

Chapter:9

Jul 20, 2022

Okay that was right up my alley! It really hits home in a comletely different way when you read about cyber security especially with the black hat or white hat/ ethical hackers and honestly it was soo good (sorry I know it must sound annoying since I always talk about that 😅) also your descriptions are amazing! I love the way you write and include every detail that helps you imagine everything like you're there so yeah it was really good and i'm excited to see what happens next 😊❤️ also I might be wayyyy off but do I smell a possible love interest? 😏😅❤️❤️

Root Access

Chapter:9

Jul 19, 2022

Excuse me WHAT? Okay I have a theory what if this old man is his grandad but he doesn't remember, I mean his Mum's Dad of course, I don't know, but I guess we'll find out in the next chapter 😅 Anyways that was absolutely adorable! I loved how despite not being able to draw Yukio was so sweet, but don't worry Hana I can't draw either girl!... I mean not as well as you 😁 please don't kill me Yukio 🥺 but that was so, so sweet and as always Mr. Author your description was amazing like honestly I could imagine myself there and it was beautiful as always 😊❤️

Blue Memory

Chapter:20

Jul 17, 2022

Okay Hana and Yukio are officially my OTP they are just adorable, and the way that Yukio looks at Hana is so sweet like you can actually picture the heart eyes 😅 and Hana is literally a ball of fluff she's so cute, and the chapter was amazing as always Mr. Author ❤️ but i'm curious as to what actually happened to Yukio's Mum becuase it definitely wasn't due to an illness from what i'vs deciphered, so I really want to know what happens when Yukio finds out he's been lied to (maybe...) oh and I refuse to believe that Emi and Daichi aren't a thing because they are obviously brewing something 🤔 like what if they were faking it all and they KNEW Yukio, Chinatsu and Hana were hiding there and they were about to kiss but because they knew about the group they went off to eat or so they say 😉😏 (I need to cleanse my mind 🤣) but loved the chapter and can't wait for the next one 😊❤️

Blue Memory

Chapter:19

Jul 16, 2022

To:IceDonut

Hahaha you guaranteed my security and I promise no bugs in the comment section.
Also you won't believe how horrible my teachers were, because of them I didn't choose computing for further studies, it was only when I got to college that my passion for computers rekindled, otherwise they were pretty mean and demotivated me a lot 😔 but no they didn't suggest me find out how much a wrist can bend before it snaps, thank God 😂
Anyway ooh now i'm intrigued 😏 now I definitely can't wait for the next chapter 😅😁

Root Access

Chapter:8

Jul 16, 2022

Okay I just have one word to sum up everything and that is pefect, the date despite minor hiccups here and there was perfect, the outfits despite the minor malfunctions was perfect and our protagonists Yukio and Hana are obviously more than perfect, everything beginning, middle and end of the date was simply perfect, Mr. Author you really and truly outdid yourself today and I honestly cannot wait to read what happens next which is making me both excited and sad, excited because I feel like we're in for a ride and sad because the summer is almost over, but I know no matter what happens Yukio and Hana will always be together, they're connected physically, emotionally and spiritually so I believe nothing will ever get in between them whether that is the distance after the summer or someone trying to separate them, okay i'm going off topic now 😅 another amazing chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next 😊❤️

Blue Memory

Chapter:18

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