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Aug 14, 2018
To:Veekeeki
Thank you haha, I didn't know whether it was a good idea to do that or not
Aug 13, 2018
To:Deleted User
Haha ty for taking the time to write that comment! I really appreciate it! It sheds light on the situation and means a lot! I'll take everything you said into consideration when I write next time! I'll also scrap this story and be making another one! One that's kid-friendly and still funny!
To:(Loli-Tsun)
I appreciate both of you for leaving me this comment, I promise to do better in the future!!!
Actually, thank you for sharing your opinions and giving out that advice. I'm also glad you were honest with me! That way I can get better in the future! I will take your advice to heart and you might have just saved me from getting a punishment from HoneyFeed XD! Thank you!!!
To:Am
Yeah, i saw that hole XD I was planning on fixing it on later chapters haha
Thank you, that means a lot! ^-^
This expresses reality, one that you don't see in many slice and life stories.
I like that starting line in the synopsis "unwanted by heaven, despised by hell, feared by humans" Great conception, I never thought of using humans as something to add to this type of story, loving this first chapter!
Aug 11, 2018
As long as I can put a smile to your face, then I'm satisfied aswell haha
To:MrZombie
I'm glad I could make a reader laugh :) That was the whole point of this story haha
I love these types of genres XD! I like what name you chose, it's simplistic but it definitely caught my eye ^-^
Thank you! I really appreciated you and everyone else taking time to read my little novel and even give me some advice, again, thank you!
Aug 09, 2018
Thank you for the advice and the mistakes should be fixed ^-^
Thank you! I just realized how much I messed up haha
Aug 07, 2018
I fixed the dialogue in the next chapter! Once again, thank you!
