Sep 29, 2023

To:Taylor J

Its gonna be a little more complex 🤭

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Sep 27, 2023

To:Taylor J

Well, who didn't experience a situation like this, right?! xD

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Sep 27, 2023

You say that as if you already stopped believing in Ravel. Do you really think he won't try to make it right?! xD But yeah, what you said is true in real life.

Yeaaaah, sorry, it wasn't anything more ridiculous, I didn't want to spend any more time on side stuff so the punishment ended up being so lame. xD

Exactly! Selling the tiara means that there is 'no way' to go back to the Beauty Contest even if they wanted to. But who knows...

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Sep 27, 2023

To:minatika

Exactly... that's what the game was supposed to reveal. But will Ravel give up on his goal?! I doubt it!

"No one's beautiful anymore" nooo, how could you T.T xD xD

Let's see if he has any chance of persuading the friends!

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Sep 27, 2023

Was that a good decision to just let them have fun for a whole chapter or did it bring nothing to the table? xD

Yes, it's meant very adult.. just like you said. xD

But I am glad you are familiar with all these games, looks like you can enjoy it more that way. xD

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Sep 27, 2023

To:minatika

I played DnD maybe twice in my life, I'd love to try again sometimes!

Yeah, Lady B enters the stage xD This went better with Lady D, Diantha, right? xD

Yeah, there are many similar games to what I set up here, I actually kinda took something from more of the games and mashed it all together. xD

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Sep 27, 2023

Zhang is Zhang, he believes he was justice. xD

You are reading Fantasia very well! Exactly what everybody should have in mind when it comes to gifts. xP

I already said this, but this whole arc is going to involve real-life locations near me, including that board game club in a nuclear shelter. xD

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Sep 27, 2023

Yes, you're right! This is the first time we meet his family along with Fantasia. x))
I tried to make their first meeting a little shocking but at the same time different than when Ravel met his father-in-law xD

Yup, in this chapter you can see that it was Ravel's father who started the whole 'U' word rule based on his not so happy circumstances in the past. But Ravel's father never got to make things right with the girl, although he did find his own happiness with Ravel's mother.

"Angy" is described as a state of rage in a cute manner, it's a slang. xD

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Sep 27, 2023

To:minatika

Yeah, I have no idea what that kid's true intentions were. 🤭 But I can imagine her father's business could bloom now. xD

I hope that this all put a nice dot after the whole Beauty Contest x))

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Sep 27, 2023

To:minatika

Silveria - redemption partially done.
Ares - redemption complete? xD
Yeah, I could twist the way Ares was portrayed antagonistically in a more creative and dramatic way, but I had to stick to the 'wholesome' concept, so there was no other choice than make him like Zinia and Fantasia as a friend/sister.
And now when Ares was seen during the contest sparkling, it was exactly when Fantasia ranked first and Zinia second, so his plan was kinda falling into place xD
Yeah, his family really did influence him a lot but... he is still a nice, awkward person x))

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Sep 27, 2023

To:minatika

I totally understand you xD Perhaps if this was an anime, she would be more likeable. I found many times that in the manga, I viewed some characters in a certain light but then when I heard the voice acting and saw movements in the anime, I had to rethink how I view the person, so... what I'm trynna say is that you definitely imagine her differently than I intended to write her, but I maybe it will be more clear towards the end haha :P

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Sep 26, 2023

To:minatika

Okay okay, thank you for that fished up compliment 😭🤣
If this wasnt a wholesome story, I could have made it even more messy and change this school into a real chaos after letting Fantasia win 🤣 but obviously that wasn't what I was going for.

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Sep 26, 2023

To:minatika

Oooh that's great to hear then! Yeah I felt like they had to use curse words if I was supposed to capture the high school life and the real vibe among male friends 😅

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Sep 26, 2023

To:minatika

I still can't process you hate the best girl and take her for a villain 😭
But thanks for explanation 🙈

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Sep 25, 2023

To:minatika

Damn, you are making me a little nervous here, your comments are on point but they make me feel like my writing choices are truly not believable and the writing was bad. BUT. That's not all there is to it, watch out for the final arc 😌

Spoilers: I didn't write the story that far but maybe I can write another epilogue for this after the contest ends xD The MAL contest, not the Beauty contest lol

Did you expect Zinia to win? And Eleona be second?

Ares... find out in the next chapter! xD

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