Feb 03, 2025
Aw a happy ending for Riley there ❤️ It would be cool to see how Riley spends the rest of his life with Mary~ Also, does he still remember his past life if he's given it up? 🤔
I enjoyed reading your story :) You had some unique ideas in there that I really liked, like Riley's soul being the key to returning him to his more preferred life but also being what could possibly destroy the world he originated from by gifting an evil man with eternal life. I would have loved to see more of it at the end of the story there with the fated meeting of Riley with the New Light leader, or hinted at more sometime throughout the story! Or also some emotional or life-changing revelation that Riley was Spark in his last life. I was so excited for some strange drama to go down in the event that Riley was ever found out! lol Still, I know the winter deadline was wild, so we all missed out on fine-tuning or adding some fitting details to our novels 😭
Anyway, congrats on finishing your novel! Sorry it took me so long to finish it. It's been hectic over here 🥲
