Dec 10, 2023
To:Loxwell
Hey
To answer your question on what I don't care about so far it would be the stats, though I could say the same about the vast majority of litRPGs and the ones in your story aren't too intrusive and don't break up the flow of the story. I feel like your MC could do with some sort of motivation to push them forward so they aren't just wandering and exploring without a purpose. Whatever lies on the final floor or the game's mysterious origins perhaps. Great work so far, and best of luck with the J-novel competition!
JPB
