Jun 13, 2023
To:kazesenken
Yes, it's Konya's POV. I will think about how to make transition smoother, my first idea was to distinct their POV in chapters by different titles, like Kiyoshi's starting with the word 'how' and Konya's with 'so'.
Last chapter Kiyoshi was so dazed with pain from beating and headaches, that he didn't witness the fight itself, he started to be more conscious when the fight was already over. Alice was in a shock at that moment. I'm sorry if I didn't make it clear enough, so I will work on that. 😥
Thank you for pointing this out. 😊
