Feb 24, 2023
To:Vforest
The way it turn out the way it is now, is because of cut content. Originally I had 3 chapters and wanted to make it look like her social skills got worse after spending a year in the forest, alone, only having a conversation with a beast. Just like Bill was talking like a caveman at the first meeting and he was talking in full sentences as he spent time with her. But I figured it would be too slow-paced and shortened it to one chapter. I had 9k words and showed it to 2k words basically. But I will return to it to smooth it out. Thanks for the comment on that part.