Taylor J / Comments

Taylor J

Hello! My name is Taylor! I am a writer and artist. One day I want to work in the video game and light novel industry and make epic stories for all of you to enjoy!

My aim is to improve a little bit every day, so please feel free to critique my work as much as you’d like! (I can take it)
-------------------------------------------------------------------------

Current Novels :
1. The Pill That Killed Romance (hiatus until after MALxHF)
2. Face of Eternity : The Journey of a Little Angel
3. Control My Life!

Upcoming Novels :

1. Apocalypse Punk Pt. 2

registered at: Feb 05, 2023

Roles

Author

Artist

Badge

silver

What is Badge?

Achievement

What is an Achievement?

Report this user

Comments

aaa

Sep 30, 2025

To:kazesenken

When I was little, I had my grandma take one half of a controller while I had the other and we tried to play through a game like that. We didn’t get very far unfortunately 😆

Control My Life!

Chapter:11

Sep 30, 2025

To:Moe Tie

Thank you!! Take your time and enjoy! I look forward to your thoughts!
(And congrats to you too on finishing! We all did made it to the end!)

Control My Life!

Chapter:26

Sep 30, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

First, I wanted to say thank you for reading through the book Mario! And thank you the review! it means a ton to me and I can’t express that in words.

This chapter was something I had in the back of my mind for a while which was just a silly interlude thing to explain Tensei's origins. I had a few different ideas for it, but I decided to go this route because it wrapped up a few other arcs that were going on in the background. (Can you find them all? 👀)

Ray and Rose were really supposed to be dual protagonists, given that they were two pieces of a whole. Ray was intelligent and able to work tech magic on the game in order to fix it. But his wife had charisma, which kept him motivated. She took the spotlight in a lot of cases because that’s her nature, but she always handed that spotlight over the Ray in the end, so he could make the decisive blow.

I think that having the real world pop up from time to time was ok from the contest standpoint, since the story predominantly takes place in the game world, but also establishes that a player on the outside has to exist for most of it. So I don't see it being an issue.

So, want a little development lore on Crow? His name was actually going to be Raven (RavenPaladin789 or something like that) all the way up until about five minutes before I uploaded that chapter. A friend who was reading told me I already had way to many R names, (Rose, Ray Roberts) and 'Raven' sounded way too much like 'Raymond,' so I decided to name him after another intelligent bird, which was a crow. Kept the same vibe I was going for.

I kinda' figured you'd like the livestreaming guy, but I was surprised you liked him as much as you did! I'm really glad though, lol! 👍

Oh, also, I believe we need to lovingly create a sticker on discord that says (YOU'VE BEEN NAKANO'D!) for the books you blaze through. (I'm always jealous how fast you read!) I know someone on YouTube who has a meme like that and I think it would fit you pretty well lol

Also, I'll be finishing through your story soon! I have more time now, so I'll blast through it!

Edit: OH remember our talk a while back about the rope tying up mechanic? in wester games? Red Dead does have it! I had it confirmed by a friend.

Control My Life!

Chapter:42

Sep 30, 2025

To:TheLeanna_M

She's a complicated little cinnamon roll, for sure!

Leanna, thank you so much for reading this story! I appreciated every single one of your comments and it was fun getting your theories as things went on. Honestly, you reading was a big motivation, so thank you very much! 👏 👏 👏

(I'll be burning through your story soon too! I have some time now, so expect many comments and a review!)

Control My Life!

Chapter:42

Sep 30, 2025

To:TheLeanna_M

Tensei fights for the users! (Tron reference btw. Don't know how many people have watched that here 😂)

Control My Life!

Chapter:41

Sep 29, 2025

That freaking golem is a beast. I'm liking the reptilian features. Adds an interesting flair.

Ren X: Last Arrival In Another World

Chapter:13

Sep 29, 2025

Hopefully Ren's tenacity doesn't carry over to Alpha, otherwise this is going to get really difficult... 😨

Ren X: Last Arrival In Another World

Chapter:12

Sep 29, 2025

That cat cellphone thing was DEVIOUS of Ren 😂

But not as devious as evil REN!!! 😈

Ren X: Last Arrival In Another World

Chapter:11

Sep 28, 2025

Well now I really feel bad for the dragon.

Interesting the connie has a different form in that world. Curious to see more of his abilities. Liking the inhabitants of the isekai world so far.