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Nov 02, 2024

I'm showing my age again, but the minute I saw that monkey man I thought about the song monkey man by The Specials and then spent the remainder of the chapter listening to it while reading which, also admittedly increased my enjoyment of the chapter by like three.

I can't really say anything. I haven't already said to be honest my dude you've got a thing for comedy. This reminds me of like space dandy but slightly more grounded. I really hope people can appreciate this story as much as I do though judging by your likes and comments that's definitely already the case..

Good job as always (HAMBURGER)

Food Truck in Space

Chapter:4

Oct 29, 2024

ITS BACK!!! All the the HAMBURGER ( HAMBURGER HAMBURGER!)

This is really making me feel like I'm watching like a 90s buddy comedy or something. I might be showing my age but it very much reminds me of something like dude where's my car or waynes world or something I do very much look forward to each chapter. You really do have a thing for comedy, at least in my opinion anyway

Food Truck in Space

Chapter:3

Oct 29, 2024

This still holds up that was a really good chapter. It's giving me Warhammer vibes only without the creepy social stigma and incel Far Rightness. I wasn't expecting` shonen style shout attacks either. Also, how much do I have to pay on Cameo to get Valric to call me daddy?

TEKTONIK

Chapter:2

Oct 29, 2024

Little heavy on the melodrama, but Archie is still as sassy bitch and your fight choreography is awesome so it's alright in the end. I must admit though I am still a sucker for the long drawn out… Death pause.

Memoria

Chapter:4

Oct 26, 2024

This is just like me in my dand games. Except im a bard...and i hate kids...and id want to make out sloppy with the corrupted

Memoria

Chapter:3

Oct 26, 2024

I absolutely absolutely love the dynamic between Randy and Ralphy. Those two together is comedy gold the thing that made this chapter the funniest thing ever for me wasn't even anything to do with what was written on the page, well, technically it was.

I use text to speech to read for me when my eyes get tired and because you used hamburgers to separate the chapter I was listening and all of a sudden I got this....

Blah blah blah blah blah as he was...

HAMBURGER HAMBURGER HAMBURGER

I've been creasing up for like 20 minutes. 10 out of 10 chapter.

Food Truck in Space

Chapter:2

Oct 25, 2024

To:Nika Zimt

Thank you very much for your comments nika! Im really glad you are enjoying it so far!

An Ode to the Stars

Chapter:3

Oct 23, 2024

To:SkeletonIdiot

Thank you for stopping by skeleton means a lot. I’m glad you’re enjoying the story so far. shout out to all of them good moms.
Tough but fair that’s how I like to describe Rowan. Doesn’t take no shit but understand her kid. She’s modelled after my mother. Thank God she’s not tech technology literate enough to read this otherwise she kill me.

An Ode to the Stars

Chapter:2

Oct 23, 2024

Hello, stubby

Just stopping by because you read my story, but my God. You don’t know me, but I love sci-fi and I absolutely fucking love space operas

This, I think, is one of the best first chapters I have read since I’ve been on this website. The world is very detailed and the writing is leagues above anything I could write and it’s quite possibly again, some of the best I’ve seen here.

Absolutely fantastic, my friend
Very well done

TEKTONIK

Chapter:1

Oct 23, 2024

To:Stubby1807

Thank you kind stranger

An Ode to the Stars

Chapter:2

Oct 23, 2024

This is really gonna be my comfort read I think not really much to say in terms of criticism or anything. It's really cool. I just had a really nice comfortable read thank you for that. I needed it today.

To The Green Lake

Chapter:2

Oct 23, 2024

To:Kitsune

Thank you for the read as always. Your question will be answered in the next chapter although originally I just had the reaction mean that he was surprised that somebody is Timid it is his friend took connection like that. I know it's probably obvious because it's me, but I really wanted to do an exploration of disability in this story. It's going to come off as over emotional and half baked because it's me in there but I just wanted to try you know?

An Ode to the Stars

Chapter:2

Oct 23, 2024

Look Mum, Dream Kaiju!

This definitely wasn't the direction that I was expecting after reading the first chapter definitely got a chuck it out for me when they explanation of what Jiro would be doing came up. I kind of like Archie too. don't know why but I imagine him with a camp accent like Tim Curry in the Rocky Horror or something.

I think this is gonna be a really interesting take on the whole virtual reality thing. You already knew this, but you've got a reader for sure now.

Memoria

Chapter:2

Oct 23, 2024

You seem to have imaculate vibes being prepared. I love me a cosy road trip. I really enjoyed the fact you managed to combine technology with wholesome family vibes really well. I wasnt sure what to except when I clicked on your story but I had a pleasant time.

To The Green Lake

Chapter:1

Oct 23, 2024

Well if this doesn't hit right on the money, I don't know what does. Really enjoyable and cosy. I had a real fun time reading it. To be honest, the alpha chad podcast part really took me out of it though, it didnt gel with the tone of the rest of the chapter, which was great.

Good job

Food Truck in Space

Chapter:1

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