Jan 04, 2025
Yeah... fine execution, but not my kind of story, and especially not my kind of ending.
Read it more or less in one sitting with some breaks, and it felt well crafted given the contest and personal time constraints you were under.
It seems like what could be said has already been stated better, more indepth, and elaborate by lolo and the following comments, so I won't try to regurgitate the same points in a lesser fashion.
