Jun 10, 2023
Okay, I think I can poinpoint some minor issues, maybe it was similar to my last comment, but I didn't catch up consciously last time:
- Good morning, as far as I know is a greeting, not a goodbye. (It use is different than with evening I think)
- Once on back, another one...
(Should be either:
One..., the other...
or
Once... and again on...)
I am not 100% sure on these and some others, as I am not a native speaker myself, but I think it's stuff like this that left me feeling that something seemed off when reading.
