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Apr 20, 2024
my comment on the previous chapter stands at-eased. am v much enjoying the dynamic between our new paladin and her twirl of encounters this chapter, thanks a lot! keep it up :)
To:GoneSoSoon
keep counting if you wish to bed at night, and you’ll dream sweetly ‘pon destrab number 83…
Apr 18, 2024
consider this your MoPost for this story
it hasn’t been an issue in particular, but I notice Duran feels like a foil you’d expect to be used for an early chapter (as he was used well in ch1) and then discarded; that is to say my brain is having trouble picking out any specifics about his character to latch onto — substance. not to say that i was expecting him to be fully fleshed out (he’s a teenager, and thus doesn’t qualify as a person yet after all) but I have trouble finding any pliancy or firmness behind his lines sometimes. thought this might be helpful to know, going forwards perhaps. keep up the great work!!
Apr 17, 2024
this is brilliant
Nov 01, 2023
There are some parts that are clunky, where the structure of sentences ‘jumps’ through things with too light a step to follow, but the tone of things carries through very nicely overall, and there’s a cohesive mood & emotion to this that’s subtle and pleasing. I enjoyed this! Thank you Lei ❤
Aug 31, 2023
To:Tomoyuki
Haha! Otherwise, what's the use in all that? 😤😤
And they said chivalry was dead 🥺 Naoki best prepare his sore arms, there’s a lot of baggage to carry~!
Aug 30, 2023
To:Yoshino
Make it a petrichor exclusive pls honeyfeed.fm 😩👀
HE DID IT, ISHII BOY, YOSHI BOY YOU DID IT HAPPY ENDINGS NEVER FELT SO GOOOOOD
Hin't 😔🙏 Ue...no
Family meeting cancelled! Run, Ichiboy, RUN
Damn, imagine rolling up on a family BBQ and getting 👁️👁️👁️👁️👁️👁️ Walk it off, Ishii boy, at least you still can 😿
Izumi do be filled with a vengeful spirit, huh 😩 Though, only until she gets in front of a nice gigantic ice cream it seems 😼
Ohhh yes, it's not the cops Naoki has to worry about 😅 Thanks so much for reading, Tomo!!
