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Destrab

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among other things, building The Suzume Project

registered at: May 23, 2023

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Aug 10, 2023

And the brief performance of Power Viviane comes to a close 😔 for now. I really enjoyed the little details of their chemistry, it does feel like the two of them are situated genuinely in their own society 😩 the poor gals. Keep it up, Sheep!! 🐑😤

Crest of the Strongest Knight

Chapter:4

Aug 10, 2023

And now, the perfect complement to Dame Cactus appears 😼 Haha it’s just like Medrauta to help someone like Viviane out, I’m glad the little lady managed to muster the courage to ask the big question 🥳 Keep it up, Sheepy!! 🐑😤

Crest of the Strongest Knight

Chapter:3

Aug 10, 2023

I’m a big fan of how strong & prickly Medrauta’s character is here 😤🌕 Part of me is tickled by the fact that she’s good enough at heart to attend classes even though they’re useless, although that might be the pressure from her superiors in action 👀 Keep it up Sheepy! 😤🐑

Crest of the Strongest Knight

Chapter:2

Aug 10, 2023

Really cool scene setup & hook! My only struggle was in the description of how distinct one character’s actions were versus another - I found myself losing track fairly often, such as the “now my lord!” moment - I couldn’t tell who’d said it. The difference of a couple words or the structure of a sentence or two makes a big difference. Anyway, hoping Medrauta gets the chance to clear her head & figure out what her strat is! Keep it up Sheep 😤😤🐑🐺

Crest of the Strongest Knight

Chapter:1

Aug 09, 2023

Goodness… It wouldn’t be an exaggeration to say this story has my heart on a thread. However it progresses & ends, I’ll be thinking of it for a long time to come. Keep it up Armonia 🐝❤

Telling the Bees

Chapter:10

Aug 09, 2023

I’m almost afraid to finish reading this story because as a result the faint voice of a tiny Isao is going to be born in the dark recesses of my mind and I’m gonna have to deal with that for the rest of my life anyway onto the next chapter

technicolor spiral

Chapter:15

Aug 09, 2023

Teddy-chan for president

technicolor spiral

Chapter:14

Aug 08, 2023

Based, I loved the pruning & shaping you’ve been up to in the interim! There’s a couple of spots where I lose sense of location - namely, where Sam and Chiyo are meeting up, but I’m digging the attitude Sam’s flaunting with much less obstruction & much more confidence from his author 😤😤

MMA: Medical Madness at the Arena

Chapter:0

Jul 31, 2023

OW OW OW OW
Poor Amber 🥲 You’ve certainly twisted this red thread in a painful knot, but now I know for a fact I won’t rest easy until the two of them are together !!

Telling the Bees

Chapter:9

Jul 31, 2023

Mitsu & Amber’s chemistry had me glued to my screen this chapter! loved the way Mercy brought everything to a slightly spicier simmer than they would’ve managed on their own this time 😌 In particular the internal dialogue was lovely, you can tell Mitsu’s written with a tender touch and a depth that rounds everything off beautifully. the dance was lovely, the way I’m reading it now it feels like it ended too quickly - there’s some moment of back-and-forth between them during the actual performance that you did a wonderful job setting up that feels like it’s missing, but I still feel teed up & excited for the next chapter. lovely work Armonia!

Telling the Bees

Chapter:8

Jul 31, 2023

it’s honestly dangerous for me to be reading this because i lose track of everything else i’m doing 😤 rode through this like a hapless jouster on an airborne horse, loved the flow of everything happening & the imagery, like Makech says, is wonderful 🐝 🙏

Telling the Bees

Chapter:7

Jul 31, 2023

I’m already a little afraid to meet Mercy… Imagine being so confident you can market your whole circus as an ‘inn’ 🙀🙀 This was a super sweet chapter!

Telling the Bees

Chapter:6

Jul 30, 2023

To:kazesenken

Ooh the STANK on this prose might just entice me to read more 🍷🗿

Kazemonogatari

Chapter:2

Jul 30, 2023

To:kazesenken

I'm digging your limericks!
I think they're honestly pretty sick
But if only it were so easy to make money on deez streets he
Might be successful if he were dreaming!
Bahaha thanks for reading Kaze 😼

NandemOnna

Chapter:8

Jul 30, 2023

To:lolitroy

All noodles are danger noodles for our boy keeping his macros in check 😩😩 Your artwork has been a guiding light, Katsumada the Iron Flower is supporting u on ur very own journey towards greatness lolo just keep it up!!!
And you feel that way?? 😰😰 He'd better be careful, if you're right...
Thanks so much for reading lolo

NandemOnna

Chapter:11

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