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story demon writer & animator among other things, building The Suzume Project
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Aug 21, 2023
Ashe, you poor thing, stretch your neck, for the weight of excellence is heavy on one's shoulders.
Aug 18, 2023
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Wahaha subtle Tomo 😼 My primary goal is to reach that point by the end of the contest, irl isn’t making it easy 😩 Thanks so much for reading Tomo!! Hope your novel’s continuing to go well 😤🙏
Aug 17, 2023
Fascinating, mature style, these guys you've written have a way of decorating the page with their presence in a way that few first chapters ever have the space for. I'm impressed! Will keep a lookout on this story :)
Them when it's all part of God's plan: 😌😌 Him when it's all part of God's plan: 🙀🙀🙀🙀
Aug 10, 2023
Waaaaah hang in there Viviane!! It’s understandable how overwhelmed she is with all the frenzy happening around her🫡 But she has her buckler! She’s invincible now!! Right? Keep it up, Sheep!! 🐑😤
The keyboard-mashing innermost monologue is a true highlight of these two 😼 Who knew that Medrauta’s complexion wasn’t utterly immovable, we have First Blush!! Love them both. Keep it up, Sheepy!! 🐑😤
Oh, Viviane, truly you’re a woman with many faces 🤔 I wonder if Medrauta is concerned at this point about what she’s gotten herself into… But time will tell whether the HISSATSU Crest will turn the tables 👀 Keep it up, Sheep!
Lady Viviane is the most anime girl I’ve read in recent history 😩 She’s so cute. I almost want to thank Amelia for giving us that moment 😌 Keep it up, Sheep! 🐑🐑
And of course, Medrauta is always in Power mode 😼 The action was incredibly easy to slide through, am looking forward to seeing how Viviane reacts to the absolute carnage she just witnessed 😤 Keep it up, Sheep! 🐑
Oh Viviane, you’ve gone and done it now 🙀 Although I can scarcely imagine it being a downgrade for any of the knights she was inviting, they’re gonna have to miss out 😼 Keep it up, Sheep! 🐑😤
And the brief performance of Power Viviane comes to a close 😔 for now. I really enjoyed the little details of their chemistry, it does feel like the two of them are situated genuinely in their own society 😩 the poor gals. Keep it up, Sheep!! 🐑😤
And now, the perfect complement to Dame Cactus appears 😼 Haha it’s just like Medrauta to help someone like Viviane out, I’m glad the little lady managed to muster the courage to ask the big question 🥳 Keep it up, Sheepy!! 🐑😤
I’m a big fan of how strong & prickly Medrauta’s character is here 😤🌕 Part of me is tickled by the fact that she’s good enough at heart to attend classes even though they’re useless, although that might be the pressure from her superiors in action 👀 Keep it up Sheepy! 😤🐑
Really cool scene setup & hook! My only struggle was in the description of how distinct one character’s actions were versus another - I found myself losing track fairly often, such as the “now my lord!” moment - I couldn’t tell who’d said it. The difference of a couple words or the structure of a sentence or two makes a big difference. Anyway, hoping Medrauta gets the chance to clear her head & figure out what her strat is! Keep it up Sheep 😤😤🐑🐺
Aug 09, 2023
Goodness… It wouldn’t be an exaggeration to say this story has my heart on a thread. However it progresses & ends, I’ll be thinking of it for a long time to come. Keep it up Armonia 🐝❤
