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Literally Hikigaya Hachiman from the hit TV Anime “My Youth Romantic Comedy Is Wrong, As I Expected” starring Hikigaya Hachiman

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May 21, 2025

It never occurred to me the first time round, but Jewel's whole "you must be in love with Amber because you're risking your life for her" argument kinda rings hollow when 30 seconds before he also risked his life for Mavis

Hime-sama: Courting the Crown Princess in Another World

Chapter:8

May 20, 2025

To:ArufaBeta

You're *almost* on the money. I'll clarify why you're not *quite* right in the coming chapters.
I'm also gonna get around to reading your next chapter soon, just on a bit of a writing/editing kick rn and wanna keep that momentum as long as I can

The Value In Being Alone

Chapter:30

May 20, 2025

You are currently reading: my autism arguing with my ADHD

The Value In Being Alone

Chapter:30

May 20, 2025

To:ArufaBeta

I felt bad writing this scene, so I certainly hope not. Thankfully the next chapter is significantly less miserable. I just finished writing it and it honestly might be my favourite chapter yet

The Value In Being Alone

Chapter:29

May 20, 2025

To:ArufaBeta

I felt bad writing this scene, so I certainly hope not. Thankfully the next chapter is significantly less miserable. I just finished writing it and it honestly might be my favourite chapter yet

The Value In Being Alone

Chapter:29

May 20, 2025

Bit of an abrupt chapter end, I know. This chapter was actually supposed to be two scenes but it was getting really long so I decided to split it in two.

Next chapter will be more chess and banter instead of depression. Will make sense tomorrow.

The Value In Being Alone

Chapter:29

May 20, 2025

I'm gonna take a wild guess and say the thing they found has something to do with dead bodies

Half Human

Chapter:1

May 19, 2025

To:ArufaBeta

When I was reading back through I got to chapter 6 and suddenly remembered "ohhhhh, shit, this character exists lol." There is one later mention of her in the scene where Sai and Yaki first meet, but it's just a throwaway joke

The Value In Being Alone

Chapter:28

May 19, 2025

To:ArufaBeta

It’s less about refusing to move the plot forward and more about shifting the direction of the plot. If I just focused 100% on the romantic element it would somewhat lose the point of the story and just become another generic high school romance flick. Considering who these characters are, it makes more sense for them to pretend to sweep it under the rug while it’s actually still on all of their minds

The Value In Being Alone

Chapter:27

May 18, 2025

That enormous rant might be the most fun I've ever had writing. I actually wrote it ages ago and have been looking for an excuse to use it

The Value In Being Alone

Chapter:27

May 18, 2025

To:ArufaBeta

Honestly I was a tad worried it would throw readers too far into the deep end. The fallout of the confession, the backstory reveal *and* Sai and Kaburi acknowledging that they’re friends for the first time is a lot for a single chapter

The Value In Being Alone

Chapter:26

May 18, 2025

Eradicating humanity for environmental reasons? Based, me and the inventor would get along well

Half Human

Chapter:0

May 17, 2025

If you're reading this you may recall that I previously said I would be rewriting the series. I lied.

Well, actually I changed my mind. Upon re-reading, I realised that all the flaws I pointed out *were* present, but also that I didn't really care. This story is deeply and fundamentally flawed but it's also exactly what I want it to be. So it's not changing. Fuck you.

The Value In Being Alone

Chapter:26

May 14, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

The main reason I wanted to write this story in the first place was to play around with archaic English and non-standard spelling, so it will remain this way all the way through. If it’s particularly immersion breaking for you, it’s unlikely you’ll enjoy reading the rest, unfortunately

Of Love and Liberation - to change þis rotten world wiþ þee [volume 1]

Chapter:18

May 07, 2025

Perhaps it's the smaller chapter count, but I'm starting to realise that I don't really buy the whole "Sakuta's so jealous he almost crashes the dance" bit. At this point we've only had a select few scenes with Amber and Sakuta, with very little of what could be considered romantic progression. It makes sense for him to have started developing some kind of crush, but to feel so strongly that he would take action so drastic? I think it's a little unearned. It feels like a contrivance in order to have the scene that sets up future reveals with Charles, not a real milestone in Sakuta's feelings for Amber.

Also I know it's nitpicky but I would *really* suggest making sure you're using "Highness" and "Majesty" right. It seems like a small thing but it can be kind of immersion breaking for us nerds who know the difference when a character like Cedrick makes that mistake since he absolutely should know the difference. Highness for prince or princess, Majesty for reigning monarch.

Regardless, most of the chapter was a good read. The prose feels refined and the reveal at the end was well executed.

Hime-sama: Courting the Crown Princess in Another World

Chapter:6

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