Nov 22, 2024
I was afraid that the fancy dinner was a trap but with the time distortion suspiciously acting up AFTER they left the town nahhh that dinner invitation was to lure them away im calling it. They’re definitely hiding someone 👀 Talia sneakin off without telling anyone again nah girl is like the reckless mc type 😭😭 Jessie go after her and make sure she doesnt get in trouble man 😭😭
Also, small feedback, im noticing a lot of repetitive phrases like saying this town is hiding something and that theres tension, but i think that atmosphere was already established from last chapter 🤔 Im sure the chapter is already good enough without reminding us of that 👍 (i think like mentioning it once is ok at the start is also fine tho)🤔
