Jan 14, 2025
To:ArufaBeta
Thank you so much for reading all the way!! Genuinely didn't expect you to pick it back up this soon and finish it so quickly too! I never expected my book would make anyone cry in class either lol but I hope your band class still went well!!
I did tweak the character descriptions within the early chapters for Noah's and Axel's first appearance, but I think that happened after you've read them already, perhaps? But I did consider drawing a character sheet but as you can see I sadly missed the deadline to add it (and I still didnt finish it lol, it'll get there... eventually)
Love to hear you've enjoyed the little quips and all that! Its a small cast, but I want to ensure their relationships are solid!
A part of me did wonder if I made this story a bit shorter than satisfactory, but I also cant think of any way for me to stretch it without my critic side saying that its unnecessary or unreasonable. This whole entry is made to be a straight-to-the-point, standalone/one-shot story with no chance of a sequel... of Radio's story, that is 😉 In the future, if there's enough demand for it, perhaps we can see Detective Noah in action 😉 As for the action, maybe I went a lil overboard with the brutality lol, I'll try to make it less gritty if its that uncomfortable, so thanks for the feedback!
Again, thank you so much for the compliments, and I'm super happy to hear you've enjoyed it!!! I do sincerely believe your story also has potential, and I'm rooting for yours too! Here's to hoping we both do well in this contest! 🥂
