Jan 12, 2025
SDKLFJDSKL JUST WHEN I THOUGHT IT WAS ALL OVER THANK GOD HES BACK... KIND OF ๐ญ So he's a reincarnation, perhaps? Or it's the same guy, just without the powers of the Eternal Hourglass and his history? ๐ค Either way, im so happy to see him back home, even if hes forgotten them. Bittersweet, but he's still alive at least, and ready to make new wholesome memories with the squad!! RIP to Thane tho... at least he's with his family now ๐ญ
Man, among all the alt-history entries, this is STILL the most wholesome (at least the one thats the most "feel-good") story of them all. All the main supporting characters have their chance to shine and even the villain was pretty well developed about his true, understandable goals. Although everyone has a sad backstory, none of the supporting characters suffer any impactful, tragic deaths besides the villain, and all of them have a pretty quick chance to recover from their traumas because of each other's support, which I think is super sweet and hopeful to see!
For a FULL BLOWN 73K NOVEL I cant imagine how much effort youve put into this to develop so many characters in one story, so i cant really say that I wish to see them getting developed more (because obviously that will exceed the max limit) but the backstories and dynamics already written so far was more than plenty enough to give me a general idea about them, and that is fine with me๐
All in all, this was once again a really solid and fun story Ive honestly enjoyed. AMAZING work, and a huge congratulations on finishing it!! ๐๐
