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I had a dream so lit I decided to write it into a chaotic story (WTRS). Feedback will always be welcomed!

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Mar 22, 2024

Yikes, I don't think the Pirates will forget their defeat. Negative memories do hurt and stay longer in our memories like a scar than good memories imo 🤔 But this is just one game!! Learn from those failures and don't give up!! (Also this loss could also help Reo balance his narcissistic side and be more humble. Maybe it could even help him forget the stress of competitiveness and enjoy football casually?)
Also idm either character for the next visual!! Either works 👍

Football Island

Chapter:17

Mar 15, 2024

Aaand the game begins! ...in a rough spot 😭👍 Looks like the Pirates are facing a more challenging team than the previous, so perhaps this might push Reo to be in his 100% serious gamer mode? I'm pretty sure his narcissistic side will make sure his team wins 👀
And wow Haneda looks great! And yeah! I think it'll be pre awesome to see everyone together like a group pic style!

Football Island

Chapter:16

Mar 12, 2024

It really was a fun read, and I'm glad this chapter wraps up the remaining questions left! You all did amazing!!

Charon's Legacy: The Clockwork Oracle

Chapter:7

Mar 11, 2024

To:Kirb

Lmao I didn't catch that but I did mentally call out Jesus Christ while reading Isaac's brutal death

Charon's Legacy: The Clockwork Oracle

Chapter:6

Mar 11, 2024

Nicely wrapped ending! For a short mystery story, I find it super enjoyable to read

Charon's Legacy: The Clockwork Oracle

Chapter:6

Mar 10, 2024

Toto nooo not the motion sickness 😭 Did I half-jinxed it chapters ago? 💀
I love how the boys got into a random fight in a retail store too. The poor clerk has to clean up their messes now 😭 (And I can totally relate to Reo... having some drama does spice things up heheh)
And Kaoru surprisingly looks cooler than I expected! Nice!! I'm gonna agree with Yoru and say that I'd like a little surprise too 👍

Football Island

Chapter:15

Mar 09, 2024

must be terrible dying from a scroll 😭

Charon's Legacy: The Clockwork Oracle

Chapter:5

Mar 08, 2024

Also Gonda's hair is a little shorter than I imagined 😯 Other than that, he looks pretty accurate to what I imagined! 👍

Football Island

Chapter:14

Mar 08, 2024

Rest in peace to the legend, Toriyama. DBZ was part of my earliest memories of childhood that I'll never forget 🙏

Onto the chapter though, that was a nice little history lesson! And I'm also liking how Reo is showing signs of interest in football again! We making progress 👀

Football Island

Chapter:14

Mar 05, 2024

With that head devoid of facial features and a face-stealing scroll, it opens up a possibility that the body never belonged to Charon, and perhaps someone else wearing his clothes. Maybe Charon's alive while watching him solve his mystery?
And maybe it's just me, but Isaac is suspiciously nonchalant in his reaction to the lord's head and all that blood, considering that the first thing we learned about him is that he can't stand the sight of blood.
Also, that ending??? Is he Charon all along?? The oracle mentioned that his face was "stolen and never returned" and yet the way the face-scrolling works is that the face gets returned after opening it again. So Savio is Charon all along?? And he got murdered but came back to life from that potion thing? I'm throwing too many wild guesses im sorry 😭

Charon's Legacy: The Clockwork Oracle

Chapter:4

Mar 01, 2024

Reo the Yurei! Maybe I'm just overthinking it but I like to think that his new nickname has a deeper meaning where he came back from the dead (or in this case came back from quitting) and became a full-fledged football player again. There's also that vision at the beginning of him seeing what looked like the ghost of his past self too 👀 Maybe i really am just thinking too much lmao

anyway woah! Shuna's much cuter than I thought!! I think she looks amazing! 👍 I'd lean a little toward Gonda but idm seeing Kaoru 🤔

Football Island

Chapter:13

Feb 26, 2024

My brain at night fr

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Chapter:5

Feb 25, 2024

where nuggets 😭

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Chapter:4

Feb 25, 2024

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Chapter:3

Feb 24, 2024

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