Oct 16, 2023
To:lolitroy
Firstly, Damn. Thats a long, lomg comment that you wrote! Well, thanks for the sheer amount of detail in case of critique. It will truly help me.
Firstly, no. Its not because 'its just the beginning' that I wrote less. It's because this point is the only point of stopping in this whole story that I planned out. Well, if I were to go any further, it would have to stop in the middle, which would contradict the rules of the contest.
Secondly, I think you should just be a little patient wait for the future of this story. Theres still a lot to uncover here. I don't want to give spoilers so thats where I have to end.
As for the editing, sorry. Being sleep deprived for 4 days messed up my mind I guess? Otherwise all those typos and erros you said would've been edited. But its too late now I guess.
The travelling aspect will change in this story soon, and the reason why he accepted the invitation is because of political reasons, that I will tell in the future.
Well, in the end. Some of the plots you said like the sister conflict one that I have poofed was necessary for the future of the story, along with some other aspects.
I guess I have answered almost all of your questions? I hope so.
And also, I take on your dare of using my imagination a bit more. Thanks! In the end, it was just a 25k word story that I streched to the max lol. In the puture there will be a lot more battles, uncovering and a lot of plot twists. Well I guess you can tell those by the 6 books thing.
Anyway, I hope that when I write the next part, you will read it. And thanks for reading it to the end! I am grateful.
