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Nov 02, 2023
To:Bubbles
Thank you for the criticism! I'll be honest, I'm not very happy with this one either. I'm not quite sure what a 'spin' is supposed to be, so I decided to write the opposite of 'death' from the original story. I'll see if I can think of anything to make it better; thanks for your points.
Aug 30, 2023
To:qt_crazy
The fact that you read it all is so amazing! Thank you so much for giving a chance to my story! 😭
I thought the chapters with Yuki's POV would be confusing... but I'm happy to know I got the story across 😆
You have no idea how happy this makes me!!
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You're commenting on almost every chapter omg ilysm 😭
That is such a nice comment, omg thank you! I hope you like it!
Aug 26, 2023
I saw your video on youtube! I liked the first chapter, and I'll slowly read the rest too. It's great motivation for me to keep working on my light novel as well.
Aug 23, 2023
Wdym sodomize 😭😭😭
Aug 22, 2023
She's related to him omg hahaha but seriously, the mystery element is so cool in this... I'm so curious about the cursed lines though...
To:ryba
I assume it wasn't too bad then😆 thank you for trying it out!
I'm starting to read this very late, but feels like it'll be a good read 😆
To:lucifer
Glad to know :)
Jul 24, 2023
To:lolitroy
His last name is Ayato.
Jul 17, 2023
To:SUZU
Thank you so much for for your kind words, this is very motivating, please look forward to more 😊