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Ashley

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Jan 10, 2025

I love how you apply metaphysical philosophy as both part of the plot but also in the interactions and thoughts of the characters. the “I hate my body” concept is a real interesting point to loop back to.

Anyway getting sidetracked in the mystery. You’re writing is great, I’m enjoying the mystery and characters, and I’m looking forward to keep reading the rest of the series 😊

Experience II

Chapter:7

Jan 10, 2025

BL… I Approve 👍

An Ode to the Stars

Chapter:20

Jan 09, 2025

It might be the glitch phone app but on my end it looks like the title may have a double space. Thought I would just note that 😊

Why'd I Have to Fall in Love with My Sister's Bestfriend?

Chapter:13

Jan 05, 2025

Your title names are incredible

Why'd I Have to Fall in Love with My Sister's Bestfriend?

Chapter:8

Jan 04, 2025

The pain Shion goes through… yikes.

The Nietzsche Protocol (TNP): The Cult

Chapter:2

Jan 04, 2025

Love the title for this chapter

Children of Ares

Chapter:12

Jan 04, 2025

I like what I’ve read so far. The biggest unique thing I must praise you on is the way you describe colours in this story. I could vividly see the rainbow of the world you were painting. It is something I haven’t noticed in many other works so I love it 😊. I also noticed the last two chapters feel slightly smoother. I think it’s a sign you are getting more comfortable with the story. it’s gotta lot of heart and I look forward to where this goes. Good luck 😊

Echoes of the Heart

Chapter:8

Jan 04, 2025

I can see why this is a strong contender for the comp, it's very well written. That being said you need to finish it. You can finish writing it! I believe in you! :)

Robot Catgirls Philosophizing on the Moon!

Chapter:1

Jan 02, 2025

“Stop doing stupid shit” made me laugh

Why'd I Have to Fall in Love with My Sister's Bestfriend?

Chapter:3

Jan 01, 2025

“memories are what defines us” but are we not also defined by others? concepts like shapes, colours and words have been created by others to define us. Are memories alone enough to define us?

I’m enjoying how this series is exploring all these great questions.

Parallel in Two

Chapter:21

Jan 01, 2025

This is a cute oneshot. I loved the “the end” fakeout

A "diary" of Kirino Sakura

Chapter:1

Jan 01, 2025

Nothing more… hmmmm… sus

Parallel in Two

Chapter:20

Dec 31, 2024

feeling old at 24 hurts

And I Feel Fine

Chapter:1

Dec 30, 2024

To:otkrlj

I wouldn't even be mad. It's a geat entry :)

Iero

Chapter:23

Dec 29, 2024

The end is too soon 😢 I really enjoyed this series

Iero

Chapter:23

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