Feb 06, 2026

To:Mario Nakano 64

Oh really,. Where exactly?

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Feb 06, 2026

To:Anime lover

Guess my next project gotta wait till I've perfected this one, worst part this novel is gonna be like 1000 plus chapters cause 13 year old me decided Hanz is going to be around to see Shu's grand kids, just so the three notebooks the story was written in😂

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Feb 06, 2026

To:Mario Nakano 64

Understood

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Feb 06, 2026

Any tips on how to improve it? 😅

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Feb 06, 2026

Alright then I know the type of format I need to use now

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Feb 06, 2026

To:Mario Nakano 64

What's wrong with the formatting? I need more details of I wanna improve 😅

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Feb 06, 2026

To:Mario Nakano 64

It's not my fault, I forgot I even named the last one end of the future arc, one of the challenges I have with writing this story is that I have a short term memory so I forget some stuff.

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Feb 06, 2026

To:Mario Nakano 64

That was what I originally thought two, sadly my imagination had other plans

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Feb 05, 2026

To:Infinite_the_black

My character's the strongest? Who decided that 😂

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Feb 05, 2026

To:Infinite_the_black

Oh really, number one where, I'm genuinely curious now 😂

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Feb 05, 2026

To:Infinite_the_black

Alright alright, I get it. You're kinda spoiling the next chapters😂😂

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Feb 05, 2026

To:Infinite_the_black

It's cool, my publishing schedule is also wonky cause of university

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Feb 05, 2026

To:Infinite_the_black

You can't be serious right now, you're really wanna compare my characters to yours😂😂

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Feb 04, 2026

To:Infinite_the_black

No biggy, I'm really digging your story and I feel like it has the potential to make a good anime😁

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Feb 04, 2026

Yup definitely seeing inspiration from the seven deadly sins anime🙂‍↕️, oh yh also I'm this chapter we got a real of at least zucifer's mother, but the way it's stated makes it feel like the brothers have different mothers cause Raphael and Michela are like zuicfer is an angel and demon hybrid. Is it just an over sight or do the bothers actually have different mothers. Also the revelation about their mother felt a bit underwhelming, happened way too early and something as huge as the fact that Zucifer's mum is an angel was just said in a casual conversation. Would have been better if it happened much down the line and there was a dedicated arc of the boys discovering who their mum was

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