Jan 23, 2026

To:Mario Nakano 64

How so😂 if it's the way I'm thinking then don't worry Hanz back story is explained In The future saga and it will make sense then😂

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Jan 23, 2026

To:Mario Nakano 64

What's bald?

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Jan 23, 2026

To:Mario Nakano 64

That obvious huh😂😂

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Jan 23, 2026

To:Mario Nakano 64

You seem to be really enjoying this project of mine 😂

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Jan 23, 2026

To:Mario Nakano 64

Never really noticed that, most have been a typo from my phone. Let me edit that real quick. thanks

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Jan 23, 2026

To:Mario Nakano 64

Yeaahhh, back then I was fourteen and still I finished high school during that period so I had a lot of time on my hands now I'm sixteen and college work is compounding so I only post when I get the chance, plus I've been getting writers block from time to time lately so that adds up too there was also the fact I thought people were t even all that interested in the story 😅 at some point I was just writing cause my mum told me she'll punish me if I don't finish the novel😂

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Jan 23, 2026

To:Mario Nakano 64

Hold up how long have you been reading this novel cause that was the first ever cover I used for the book🤣, well it's actually Shun

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Jan 23, 2026

To:Mario Nakano 64

Also please comment your thoughts when you reach the future arc cause I have this feeling the jump was a bit too abrupt but I don't have anyone who can give their opinions on it😅

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Jan 23, 2026

To:Mario Nakano 64

I'll keep that in mind thank you, do note that I wrote most of these chapters when I was fourteen so yeah they tend to be some errors here you won't see in later chapters. Althoguh when I'm done writing the entire novel according to my vision I plan on re editing everything to fix the minor issues

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Jan 22, 2026

To:Mario Nakano 64

Yup, really appreciate your comments keep on reading, and tell me your honest opinions on each chapter even if it's a corrective one😁

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Apr 30, 2025

I'm not really one to comment but I just felt like a comment will help with motivation the novel is splendid, you really have a talent for written, I suggest you publish on other platforms too to increase the chances of it being seen.

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Apr 09, 2025

Please drop a comment for what you wanna see happen in the next chapter, should we continue with Hanz's story or do you wanna cut back to Shu

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Dec 20, 2024

Hey guys, sorry about the way I've been publishing chapters. I've had to joggle a lot but I have more time now so the updates would be more frequent thank y'all for reading this

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Nov 29, 2024

i'm so sorry about the original prologue, it had some issues when i was transferring it to honey feed and only the last paragraph came out. I've fixed it so feel free to read the chapter and leave a comment

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Nov 28, 2024

this is actually pretty good, i don't know how you do it but you manage to pull in your viewers from the first chapter alone, keep up the good work.

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