Oct 15, 2019
Last chapter??? I feel like we haven't even got to the beginning of the story yet!!
That being said, I really like both your characterization (which I think is due in part to the good dialogue) as well as the pacing of the story.
There are a LOT of big ideas presented to us from the beginning, so at first, I thought the story was going to be overwhelming. However, that is far from the case, as your characters are very down to earth and make the story feel grounded and true to life despite being in a fantasy world.
Looking forward to more!
