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Hi my name is Chad, I like anime, manga, video games, and studying Japanese!

I hope you enjoy reading my writings.

registered at: Oct 13, 2019

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Oct 22, 2019

Did you mean Cameron's Feint instead of Falcon Rock, or is that another place? 🤔

Also, I like Rio more in this chapter than the last one! Looking forward to how this relationship develops.

Parable of the Renegades [BETA Version]

Chapter:6

Oct 15, 2019

After a full day of working in a computer chair I need this kind of treatment right now tbh

Parable of the Renegades [BETA Version]

Chapter:2

Oct 15, 2019

She pulled a sneaky on him.
Also,
>nearly transparent lab coat
>one piece swim suit
>hourglass figure
You have my interest

Parable of the Renegades [BETA Version]

Chapter:1

Oct 15, 2019

Last chapter??? I feel like we haven't even got to the beginning of the story yet!!

That being said, I really like both your characterization (which I think is due in part to the good dialogue) as well as the pacing of the story.

There are a LOT of big ideas presented to us from the beginning, so at first, I thought the story was going to be overwhelming. However, that is far from the case, as your characters are very down to earth and make the story feel grounded and true to life despite being in a fantasy world.

Looking forward to more!

Age of Ember beta

Chapter:3

Oct 15, 2019

Ziggy is hilarious I love this man. I was gonna feel really bad if his wife didn't accept his word lol

Age of Ember beta

Chapter:2

Oct 15, 2019

Cross dimensional phenomena, time distortion, and callous gods abusing their power (and a sliver of hope that non-gods can defeat them) are some of my favorite things.

Also love the details, they make the setting and story seem ginormous in scope and am looking forward to how it all plays into the story.

Age of Ember beta

Chapter:1

Oct 13, 2019

I think this is a killer setup. I'm looking forward to how all of this is going to play out in the rest of the story (and for humanity)

Parable of the Renegades [BETA Version]

Chapter:0

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