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ART by the AMAZING furies. Please check out Reverse of the Rain. carthonladler74
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Mar 08, 2025
To:Kirb
Aight, I implemented my solution. Added text to previous chapter to lead more nicely into this one. Added text to this one as well
This was something I agonized over as well. Glad to see someone confirm my suspicions. I dont want to change the content, but some structuring needs to happen
Good hook!!
Great start. Love the personality you can so clearly see in the first person POV you chose for this. Good work
Mar 07, 2025
To:Cashew Cocoa
Yknow what it could use a line break. Added so hopefully the transition is smoother
The formatting is a little bit screwed with this one
Kael eccentrics, I had to manually define it with the editor tool I was using LOL
To:lolitroy
Tmr PST circa midnight
Not really. The other chapters are pretty explicitly in Elisa's POV. Occasionally, the POV switches, particularly in interludes, but it should mostly be in Elisa's POV since she is the MC
Mar 06, 2025
EEEEE a new chapter
Amazing productivity wow
Smelly stinky Sayuri woew...
To:Joya
There will be more to come!!! Hopefully I nail it between the two mcs
I can see this becoming a real tear jerker by the end
CINEMA
