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ART by the AMAZING furies. Please check out Reverse of the Rain. carthonladler74
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Mar 22, 2025
To:Kirb
Good pick up editing oversight 😭
Mar 21, 2025
It's good writing, and poor Seren. One note though: less dialogue tags, I add. It is obvious enough who's speaking, and if u think it is still necessary, then make them perform an action to subtly convey who is talking
Mar 20, 2025
Until WHAT leaks out from us??
To:Bubbles
I had that at the back of my mind the entire time, but said nah and kept chugging. I'll see if at the end of the fic I have the time to edit this sort of thing. Good to have at the back of my mind
OMG lolo remembered password
Incredibly strong start, good work on making you feel for the mc right off the bat
To:lolitroy
It only happened twice so far wdym
Mar 19, 2025
Soon... sooner than u think
The Oligarchy Of Honeyfeed might have wanted a serious End Is Now story, but this wins in my heart.
To:Sinnocence
Are you fr. Don't underestimate yourself. Your prose is deadass better than most in the running at the moment. Be kinder to yourself
A new contender!! Looking forward to more updates
Mar 18, 2025
Caught up!! Like it so far. If there was anything to comment on, it'd DEFINITELY be chapter length. I don't know how, but you certainly have the words to split the story up. Maybe Parts 1, 2, 3 and so on? Otherwise, very gud.
Mar 17, 2025
To:Nika Zimt
Danke schon
Caught up!! If it helps, I think the writing has been made more compelling up until this point, it was already compelling but this has more 'intent' to it. Really enjoying it so far. This decision is going to be worth it
Mar 16, 2025
ITS HERE!!!!
