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ART by the AMAZING furies. Please check out Reverse of the Rain. carthonladler74

registered at: Nov 16, 2024

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Mar 09, 2025

To:Kirb

Concordant prefers the term very reasonable; act nice when it suits them. We both know the High Lords have a lot of skeletons in their closet too LOLLL

Tinker, Tailor, Tyrant, Traitor, Husband… Mine?!

Chapter:19

Mar 09, 2025

I love the little tidbits of your personality shining thru the internal monologue! keep going!!

The Rootbound Heart

Chapter:1

Mar 09, 2025

Gathering feedback here -- do you like the MCs just talking about the wider world and their opinions on things? Do you find this boring? I need your opinions!!

Tinker, Tailor, Tyrant, Traitor, Husband… Mine?!

Chapter:19

Mar 08, 2025

To:Kirb

Also removed a scene

Tinker, Tailor, Tyrant, Traitor, Husband… Mine?!

Chapter:18

Mar 08, 2025

To:Kirb

Aight, I implemented my solution. Added text to previous chapter to lead more nicely into this one. Added text to this one as well

Tinker, Tailor, Tyrant, Traitor, Husband… Mine?!

Chapter:18

Mar 08, 2025

To:Kirb

This was something I agonized over as well. Glad to see someone confirm my suspicions. I dont want to change the content, but some structuring needs to happen

Tinker, Tailor, Tyrant, Traitor, Husband… Mine?!

Chapter:18

Mar 08, 2025

Good hook!!

Your Knight in Shining Spacesuit

Chapter:2

Mar 08, 2025

Great start. Love the personality you can so clearly see in the first person POV you chose for this. Good work

Your Knight in Shining Spacesuit

Chapter:1

Mar 07, 2025

To:Cashew Cocoa

Yknow what it could use a line break. Added so hopefully the transition is smoother

Tinker, Tailor, Tyrant, Traitor, Husband… Mine?!

Chapter:5

Mar 07, 2025

The formatting is a little bit screwed with this one

Fantasy Story

Chapter:1

Mar 07, 2025

To:Kirb

Kael eccentrics, I had to manually define it with the editor tool I was using LOL

Tinker, Tailor, Tyrant, Traitor, Husband… Mine?!

Chapter:17

Mar 07, 2025

To:lolitroy

Tmr PST circa midnight

Tinker, Tailor, Tyrant, Traitor, Husband… Mine?!

Chapter:16

Mar 07, 2025

To:Cashew Cocoa

Not really. The other chapters are pretty explicitly in Elisa's POV. Occasionally, the POV switches, particularly in interludes, but it should mostly be in Elisa's POV since she is the MC

Tinker, Tailor, Tyrant, Traitor, Husband… Mine?!

Chapter:5

Mar 06, 2025

Amazing productivity wow

What is 'love' in Japanese, Iwasaki-kun?

Chapter:4

Mar 06, 2025

Smelly stinky Sayuri woew...

Cat Got My Tongue

Chapter:3