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I have (a lot) of ideas. So I am writing them all
Jun 03, 2025
To:Deleted User
Wow, that is so awesome. Like I read your comment and I couldn't believe it was about my story, thank you so much. Sometimes I feel like stopping writing this story but I keep drafting more chapters because I Enjoy it and I'm glad you also did. This made my day, cliche I know. Hope you keep on reading
Jun 01, 2025
Great start, liked the cultural aspects and all. I don't know anything about the culture at all so it was interesting
Great work. i dont know what i expected when i got into this but it definitely not this and i mean that in the best way possible. I enjoyed this chapter, well done.
This chapter was great, I'm assuming its still a flashback from the present. Like the developments with Musa. He has to keep clear of his surroundings especially in the big cities. I actually like these flashback stories, they are really great
May 31, 2025
To:Robin Grayson
Thanks. i tried my best to bring the descriptions to life and the whole atmosphere. There are alot of improvements i made from suggestions in the comments. Read ahead to find out, i just posted a new chapter today
May 25, 2025
To:ArseNic AlucroN
Thanks so much man, I do like this arc alot more now too. at first i wanted it to be a few chapters but I kept liking it the more i wrote it and it just opened these new possibilities that i hadn't thought of. Anyway, long story short I'm glad you like the arc and that you kept reading the story as a whole.
May 22, 2025
what a great chapter. The game was intense and I liked the pacing of the whole match by splitting it into two.
appreciate it. Thanks for keeping up with it. I will be releasing new chapters soon, stay tuned....
May 15, 2025
Loved the new cover page.
May 13, 2025
Nice intro and i loved the concept, great
May 09, 2025
Nice fight. Guess you couldn't make the deadline. It's fine, though, as long as the story moves how you want, I think that's much more Important anyway, Zero cool name by the way, he seems unstoppable like how can Victor even win. Also his blood can do some cool things, like can he infect anyone without the need to bite them like you established before?
May 06, 2025
Hmm, you are cooking there. In my thinking the theme of this is that love is a curse. But love is also what released Eirelyn from her curse. But I like your theory, it's valid. But i also have another reason for it...
I don't know I'm also guilty of those two word comments. But I also respond based on how the comment is. I also dig your comments, if anything, you make me respond more cause of your response. Make sense?
Liked the concept, I know it's (not an isekai) but it's good. Riku is definitely gonna be overpowered for sure. If I could give some suggestions, to separate the lines a bit because following can be a bit of a chore, also it will look better. Just a suggestion though, good work
nice intro