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I have (a lot) of ideas. So I am writing them all

registered at: Nov 18, 2024

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Jun 10, 2025

Loved the concept, I loved the Lion guard series and to flip it with Vitani and Kovu, i never would have expected that.
Just one tiny suggesstion, to sepatrate the dialogue with the story because it is difficult to get through at least for me and it will make it easier to read overall. anyway, good work and I'm excited for the rest of the story, wonder who else will show up....

The Lion King: Shadows of Ice

Chapter:1

Jun 10, 2025

love the concept of the story

(G)host Writer

Chapter:1

Jun 09, 2025

I actually like short chapters

A Prophecy Of Night And Sun

Chapter:36

Jun 07, 2025

Great start to the story. Love the creepy vibes...nice work

The Doll In Horaji Ryokan

Chapter:0

Jun 04, 2025

To:Barbados Nascar

Right. I get it. It feels that way and I am trying to remedy that and the entire characters developments as a whole.
Don't worry though, the therapy sessions are coming back, it is the core of the series after all.

THE DIARY OF A NORMAL LOSER

Chapter:17

Jun 04, 2025

To:Deleted User

Interesting, you can just tell me in the comments, i really don't mind...

THE DIARY OF A NORMAL LOSER

Chapter:3

Jun 03, 2025

To:Deleted User

Wow, that is so awesome. Like I read your comment and I couldn't believe it was about my story, thank you so much. Sometimes I feel like stopping writing this story but I keep drafting more chapters because I Enjoy it and I'm glad you also did. This made my day, cliche I know. Hope you keep on reading

THE DIARY OF A NORMAL LOSER

Chapter:3

Jun 01, 2025

Great start, liked the cultural aspects and all. I don't know anything about the culture at all so it was interesting

Love Me, But Love Me Not

Chapter:1

Jun 01, 2025

Great work. i dont know what i expected when i got into this but it definitely not this and i mean that in the best way possible. I enjoyed this chapter, well done.

THE NEW WORLD

Chapter:1

Jun 01, 2025

This chapter was great, I'm assuming its still a flashback from the present. Like the developments with Musa. He has to keep clear of his surroundings especially in the big cities.
I actually like these flashback stories, they are really great

KAWANGWARE STREETS

Chapter:15

May 31, 2025

To:Robin Grayson

Thanks. i tried my best to bring the descriptions to life and the whole atmosphere. There are alot of improvements i made from suggestions in the comments. Read ahead to find out, i just posted a new chapter today

HARMONIC CONVERGENCE

Chapter:0

May 25, 2025

To:ArseNic AlucroN

Thanks so much man, I do like this arc alot more now too. at first i wanted it to be a few chapters but I kept liking it the more i wrote it and it just opened these new possibilities that i hadn't thought of. Anyway, long story short I'm glad you like the arc and that you kept reading the story as a whole.

UNSXNCTIONS

Chapter:31

May 22, 2025

what a great chapter. The game was intense and I liked the pacing of the whole match by splitting it into two.

A TALENTED LEARNER

Chapter:16

May 22, 2025

To:Robin Grayson

appreciate it. Thanks for keeping up with it. I will be releasing new chapters soon, stay tuned....

UNNECESSARY CONNOTATIONS

Chapter:2

May 15, 2025

Loved the new cover page.

NOCTURNIS

Chapter:12

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