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I have (a lot) of ideas. So I am writing them all
Aug 13, 2025
This is a unique direction and concept, well done..
To:ArseNic AlucroN
Thanks I am still working on it, try to figure out the rules and all that. Of course it has been influenced by many systems before it. Oh and Ash's ability does more or less still follow the elemental system for the most part, with the weapons part, i'm working to introduce that as we go on. Thanks for reading . also you're not posting much these days, are you busy or....
Aug 10, 2025
It was a bit hard to follow with the whole dialogue not separated, if you fix that it could easier to read👍
Aug 08, 2025
i like the concept of this, good work
To:Robin Grayson
Thanks for reading. Yeah, i had first thought of using Zaruto but changed it. It was also a stylistic choice as i'm kinds doing this thing where i double characters letters in the names, not for all of them. The Ash part was something i struggled a bit and thought it would be confusing and maybe it is, but i'm glad you appreciate the attempt.........
Aug 04, 2025
Thanks, bro and I saw your review, it was so cool you did that when you finish yours I'll be sure to return the favour. But anyways i'm glad you enjoyed it.......
Jul 31, 2025
Thanks to everyone who gave this series a try, it was a hard but fulfilling journey that I hope you will enjoy as much as I did. Peace ya'll...................
Jul 29, 2025
To:Eliza Kane
Sheesh, you must be reading my mind. That's kinda the vibe I was going for. Thank you for reading....
Jul 25, 2025
Interesting premise. The pacing is supersonic but i appreciate it. Also, it was a bit jarring reading in that present-style, but as i read more i hardly noticed. The whole science angle is different but can definitely work. I think you could take some time to develop the MC afterwards because so far it's just been scene after scene, but that's just my opinion. Good work....
Jul 16, 2025
So, funny thing is this chapter was actually going to be the first chapter of the story. It was this and some other chapter combined i think. I even had the ending of the story locked in but as i wanted to publish, i tweaked one thing and it changed the whole story and i had to start again. But i'm still glad i did. Anyway, hope you all keep reading on.....
To:Barbados Nascar
Haha, i think you mean Jonah. Yeah he's surrounded by his own harem but just can't enjoy it given the circumstances. Glad you liked it, i didnt know if it was going to be good at first but i liked it enough to keep it....
Shit, i forgot to reply. Am sorry, It was a hectic time. Appreciate the likes as always and the read. This chapter was important for the whole story and i wanted some time for the characters to just breathe
Loved this chapter. I had even forgotten about the whole Salvatore thing from the prologue but nice tying and the explanation didn't feel forced. By the way, are you entering the Isekai contest thing
Okay, interesting...
Jul 09, 2025
To:Deleted User
Thanks for reading and following, appreciated. I'm glad you liked the story and you can always comment and ask questions whenever....