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I have (a lot) of ideas. So I am writing them all
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Sep 12, 2025
A good start and I love the quote at the start. But if i could critique: your paragraphs are a bit long, maybe you could split them and split the chapter into two if you can. It is a bit difficult to get through. But anyways, good start.....
Oh, it would be fun if we got some shovel-on-shovel fights. And I love that sequence from the void, digging through worlds, great.......
To:Zairo
Yeah, I just read yours and it was so funny. Why?..
The unbreakable shield slightly pulls through. But that shovel looks more and more important....
Sep 11, 2025
i had a lot of fun with this chapter......
You can't underestimate the strongest barrier user in the world, come on. That shovel better come clutch.....
I was very particular about the Rings being different. The creature descriptions are fun to do and most are like combinations of different animals/creatures....
Hmm, you theories are really interesting. That's all i'll say.....
Sep 10, 2025
A casual gamer......
Sep 09, 2025
This was a great chapter. The style in which you wrote this especially stood out to me........
A guitar battle, classic. Time for the other elves to feel her wrath too.....
To:ArseNic AlucroN
um, yeah that was always the plan for Thomlin and Grinn to come back but it changed from how it was supposed to happen. I changed some things as the story evolved....
Sep 07, 2025
To:Barbados Nascar
How did you forget that laptop.😂................
Sep 05, 2025
Elisa, purple hair and eyes but decided to ruin it with a yellow hat and red shoes, her fashion sense is out of this world but the cover art looks like it works. anyway, i liked this chapter. I wonder if the thief is actually in this new world.....🤔
Sep 04, 2025
To:Robin Grayson
Hmmm...............