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I have (a lot) of ideas. So I am writing them all

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Sep 16, 2025

I don't know Almza might just be the De...cough, cough.
The yin yang with the shovels storyline and if the withering comes from the travel between worlds is my favourite parts...

FLIPSIDE

Chapter:10

Sep 15, 2025

To:Zairo

For now i think mine is better but yours still has some potential if he trains harder but i doubt it 😂

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Chapter:8

Sep 13, 2025

What's up honeyfeed universe...
So, look the time is counting fast and the deadline is approaching. Normally, I would just focus on writing at my pace but I really want to finish this one on time.
With that out of the way, this chapter is one i have stripped down a lot. When I wrote it, it had over 2000 words on it, detailing the fight between Ariyanna and her sister but while i cut off some huge chunks of scenes, it doesn't change the story that much, and i did get to show what I wanted which is that although the power system is based off the six elements, they are some individuals that speciliaze or have unique subset abilities like Rhennmar with her magneticism lightning attacks.
I had touched upon activation techniques in previous chapters where basically as a way to "jumpstart" the flow in the user/weaver's body. for example, the hand signs by Rhennmar is an example of how the activations evolve as one becomes proficient where it is not necessary to use them all the time but for special and heavy attacks it is important.
anyways that's it see next chapter.......

Ashes of the Summoned: The World Without HEROES

Chapter:39

Sep 12, 2025

A good start and I love the quote at the start. But if i could critique: your paragraphs are a bit long, maybe you could split them and split the chapter into two if you can. It is a bit difficult to get through. But anyways, good start.....

FFF-Class 'Unlucky Antagonist'

Chapter:1

Sep 12, 2025

Oh, it would be fun if we got some shovel-on-shovel fights. And I love that sequence from the void, digging through worlds, great.......

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Chapter:8

Sep 12, 2025

To:Zairo

Yeah, I just read yours and it was so funny. Why?..

Ashes of the Summoned: The World Without HEROES

Chapter:9

Sep 12, 2025

The unbreakable shield slightly pulls through. But that shovel looks more and more important....

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Chapter:7

Sep 11, 2025

i had a lot of fun with this chapter......

Ashes of the Summoned: The World Without HEROES

Chapter:33

Sep 11, 2025

You can't underestimate the strongest barrier user in the world, come on. That shovel better come clutch.....

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Chapter:6

Sep 11, 2025

To:Zairo

I was very particular about the Rings being different. The creature descriptions are fun to do and most are like combinations of different animals/creatures....

Ashes of the Summoned: The World Without HEROES

Chapter:7

Sep 11, 2025

To:Zairo

Hmm, you theories are really interesting. That's all i'll say.....

Ashes of the Summoned: The World Without HEROES

Chapter:6

Sep 10, 2025

To:Zairo

A casual gamer......

Ashes of the Summoned: The World Without HEROES

Chapter:5

Sep 09, 2025

This was a great chapter. The style in which you wrote this especially stood out to me........

Once Upon A Time Ago : An Isekai

Chapter:0

Sep 09, 2025

To:ArseNic AlucroN

um, yeah that was always the plan for Thomlin and Grinn to come back but it changed from how it was supposed to happen. I changed some things as the story evolved....

Ashes of the Summoned: The World Without HEROES

Chapter:29

Sep 07, 2025

To:Barbados Nascar

How did you forget that laptop.😂................

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Chapter:18

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