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I have (a lot) of ideas. So I am writing them all

registered at: Nov 18, 2024

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Jan 04, 2026

Beautiful story. I felt sad for Silas, but at least he died achieving his dream and becoming the guardian was a nice touch.......

Where the Grey Light Grows

Chapter:5

Jan 03, 2026

30 years? That old man is persistent. Wonder what that glow means? More discovery I hope......

Where the Grey Light Grows

Chapter:1

Jan 03, 2026

To:Robin Grayson

Sorry for the late reply.
Anyway, glad you liked the chapter. Yeah I wanted that visual evoking in descriptions. Oh and I stretched it into five parts, it just got longer than I wanted.......

KISHIN: The Mythic Awakening

Chapter:3

Jan 02, 2026

This is the end of the mini-arc, it was fun but now we get to the story.....

KISHIN: The Mythic Awakening

Chapter:5

Jan 01, 2026

So that's it guys. Thank you to anyone who read this. It was for sure a challenge and yeah now I shift focus to my new contest work, KISHIN, you can give it a read if you find the time. CHeers....

SNOWBOUND

Chapter:8

Dec 31, 2025

To:Stoneflew

So that's where your mind went to LOL.
Yeah, I had this idea, which may be stupid, we'll see - about starting right on the battlefield instead of explaining how the world came to be. Its great that you get just a bit, I try to explain as much as I can. As for Reiji, you'll have to wait and see.....

KISHIN: The Mythic Awakening

Chapter:1

Dec 30, 2025

Sheesh all this in the first chapter?
Awesome, liked it. I know some may not like dark stories but I do.......

Alishia

Chapter:1

Dec 30, 2025

cool idea with the summaries.....

Alishia

Chapter:0

Dec 30, 2025

Nice chapter, I like how you provided exposition with the class format. The only nitpick is the name Kenji and Ken, Is that the same person or two people, because it seems one of them gets bump and the other feels the pain, I don;t know maybe I'm wrong....

Kijin: Neo Haikyo JAPON

Chapter:1

Dec 30, 2025

interesting premise. well done......

Kijin: Neo Haikyo JAPON

Chapter:0

Dec 30, 2025

To:Stoneflew

Yeah I get it. I actually had to separate mine first chapter into five parts because the amount of information I wanted to tell was a lot and shortening the chapter just wouldn't work.
Don't worry I'm not overwhelmed at all.......

The Spirit of a Samurai

Chapter:1

Dec 29, 2025

Woah, okay you might remember me from the prologue, never mind...Great stuff here, I do like the characters. Chapter felt too long If I'm being honest but it was enjoyable. Also I think someone commented on the honorifics stuff....I don't know, I kinda decided to avoid them altogether unless necessary. For example if two friends are talking, I think its best to avoid......

The Spirit of a Samurai

Chapter:1

Dec 29, 2025

Okay now this is a prologue. Great start.....

The Spirit of a Samurai

Chapter:0

Dec 27, 2025

To:Astrowolf🐤🐣

Oh, thanks, I thought it might be something like that🤷‍♂️.......

KISHIN: The Mythic Awakening

Chapter:1

Dec 27, 2025

To:Crownz

I'm sorry I don't remember you but you can reach me on here if you like........

KISHIN: The Mythic Awakening

Chapter:1

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