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Aug 02, 2026

To:Soulwriter861

Thank you!

Knights of Walthuria

Chapter:2

Aug 02, 2026

To:Soulwriter861

Thank you for reading. Glad you enjoyed it.

Knights of Walthuria

Chapter:1

Jul 31, 2026

To:Soulwriter861

Interesting. I personality thought the gorgon custody was a bit weak.
Glad you enjoyed it.

Interspecies Court of Justice

Chapter:2

Jul 31, 2026

To:Soulwriter861

Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading.

Interspecies Court of Justice

Chapter:1

Jul 30, 2026

Good bye Skrag. For some reason, I didn't find Sharkins that competent. Maybe it's because he leans a little hard on the play-with-your-food kind of villain. Nonetheless, the action was interesting.

Also... I was expecting the spirit to show up again. We shall see.

Invictus: Champion of Defiance in a Game of Gods

Chapter:3

Jul 30, 2026

Not going to fault you for the heroine's mirror opening as you focused on personality instead of mere looks. Nora radiates "adorkability", which fits the prompt wonderfully, and is immediately likeable.

At times, I feel the descriptive details (great strength of yours) and some exposition is slowing the story a little. However, most of the time, the world-building and characterisation is highly organic.

The Little Witch Who Loves Slimes Just A Little Too Much

Chapter:1

Jul 30, 2026

Okay, you got me!
Very interesting premise and oozing with personality. First person was absolutely the correct perspective.

The Little Witch Who Loves Slimes Just A Little Too Much

Chapter:0

Jul 29, 2026

To:J.C. Chambers III

Thank you again! Some call it Chekhov's gun, I just think I'm not very subtle.

Knights of Walthuria

Chapter:2

Jul 29, 2026

Thank you! And yes, the sword is... stubbornly heavy. Glad you liked Wodan.

Knights of Walthuria

Chapter:1

Jul 29, 2026

Very meticulous. I'm sure Uric will die at a more fitting time.

Invictus: Champion of Defiance in a Game of Gods

Chapter:2

Jul 27, 2026

You have creative prose. I'd like to see greater narrative momentum.
Finally, this is as mysterious as it is confusing. The former is good, the latter, a bit frustrating. Good effort. Hope you enjoy the comp.

The Dark Side of the Sun

Chapter:1

Jul 25, 2026

That was whimsical and fun. The almost deadpan narration makes a really amusing contrast with how upbeat and positive Lavender is.

The Princess Who Stopped Waiting

Chapter:1

Jul 25, 2026

To:AdventFalls

That's a lovely compliment. Thank you very much!

Knights of Walthuria

Chapter:1

Jul 21, 2026

To:Taylor J

Thanks.

The Lotus Abduction

Chapter:3

Jul 21, 2026

To:Deleted User

Sure. I use the same ID on the Honeyfeed discord.

The Lotus Abduction

Chapter:3

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