Jul 28, 2025

To:McMolly

thank you! “Cinematic” was exactly what I was going for. I hope you enjoy the story!

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Jul 28, 2025

thank you! I’ve been trying to build the world slowly before really diving into the action and main conflict! I hope you enjoy the upcoming chapters.

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Jul 24, 2025

To:Moon

yep! I’m enjoying writing their dynamic thus far. learning to trust others will be one of their biggest forms of growth for sure.

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Jul 24, 2025

To:Moon

thank you! and yes the countdown was probably my favorite part to write. thanks for reading!

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Jul 19, 2025

To:Soren Vexis

thank you!

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Jul 19, 2025

thank you so much! I hope you enjoy reading the story!

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Jul 16, 2025

awwww thank you. I want the prose to be very enjoyable along with the story and dialogue, so I appreciate that!

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Jul 15, 2025

To:alchemimi

thank you! glad you’re enjoying their relationship. and don’t worry, Tomita is going to have to dodge far worse than those pesky rocks!

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Jul 09, 2025

To:daniuse

yep the trick to surviving corporate is to lie and pretend you’re more than you are! and don’t worry, the story is about to dive into why and how Izhari was being hunted.

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Jul 09, 2025

To:Ñix

thank you Nix!

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Jul 08, 2025

To:haru

also, if you notice, Naoe often hints at her situation in defensive jokes and wordplay. her comment about “catching up to,” regarding her being 18 is a reference to her never aging.

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Jul 08, 2025

To:Evelyn Adelberg

ha! thanks for catching! I just loved it so much I had to post it twice…

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Jul 08, 2025

To:Bauyrzhan

thank you!

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Jul 08, 2025

To:daniuse

thank you!

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Jul 08, 2025

To:haru

yep! and the dream imagery has hints of everything that make more sense when you know what it going on. thanks for re-reading!

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