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Jan 28, 2026
To:Crys Meer
he definitely got the most heroic death of the story. our little badass hateful father.
I was so hyped when I came up with this idea. and originally I actually had the reveal happen way sooner, like the world knew this happened to the songstresses. it was supposed to fully solidify Sayane’s own emotional challenge against them. but in the end I felt the attack on the underworld and her connection to the oppressed was already enough, so this was moved to a twist reveal at the end. it brings it all full circle though, which I think works better at the end, plus it had more impact. Sayane knows what it’s like to have your voice taken and turned into a product. this is a horrifying, extreme version of that.
yep he was a joy to write.
I’m so glad you liked it! and yep a happy, hopeful ending. there is still much to be done, though. Sayane’s story is not finished. (I may or may not already have an outline done for the remaining novels as well as some songs already written). This truly became my favorite thing I’ve ever written and I’m so grateful that so many have read it and resonated with our dear songstress. This life is beautiful. Sayane Forever.
Jan 27, 2026
To:Jen_F
lots of hand moments
yep. one of my favorite moments of the whole story.
yep the juxtaposition between the beautiful tranquility of Nikko’s isolation and Tokyo’s neon chaos is an interesting challenge. the tone of Tokyo is definitely different.
interesting! I’ll give it a listen. especially since Shuhei’s meds are Lithium based.
I really liked Sayane in this role. she’s a caring persona that brings some needed feminine nurturing to Kaho and to the story. and yes this is definitely a turning point for Kaho. after years of being near comatose and isolated, she’s finally feeling again, both good and bad.
To:blxssed
no rush! good luck with your exam. and take some time to decompress afterwards! my story isn’t going anywhere.
To:Nato_otan1
ha! well congrats me I guess. glad you like the writing! and yeah these are definitely some more serious characters. depressed, hot, yearning, serious folks.
good! that’s what I wanted. as heavy as some of this subject matter is, I still imagined this as a romantic, cozy read by the fire during the winter.
can do! that makes me happy because I hate doing analytical reviews lol. vibes it is. I look forward to the journey.
These characters are always an interesting challenge. Being a teen makes it a little easier to tolerate Takumi’s self centered arrogance, but it can definitely get tiring quick! I’m excited to see how you handle it. And we love a calm, quiet person taking down a proud character with just a few lines.
Ok jumping in like we talked about. What sort of feedback would you like? I can critique from an actual grammar etc standpoint but I’m no editor, so I generally like to focus on the vibes, emotions and characters.