Jan 22, 2025
To:Steward McOy
Hello Stew, thank you so much for reading, commenting, liking, and also thank you for the feedback. I really appreciate it. I'm glad you were able to find parts of the story you think might work well, I'm also glad you provided suggestions for improvements. The one point I was trying to make, was that even a utopian society is not completely without its flaws. And for music and metal, its societal flaws lies in how it tries to maintain its Utopia at the start of the story, and the consequences that comes about because of it. Kokoro's story in particular, although bittersweet, is meant to show the beauty and harmony between technology and humanity, while also serving as a catalyst for recognition, inclusion, and positive change. I really appreciate your thoughts and advice. Thank you so so much. And I also wish you much luck with your story as well. Thank you for the feedback.
